Comments: 13
SuperGirlSwag [2011-12-22 16:00:31 +0000 UTC]
very interesting poem. deep and sad .
well written
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xxacexofxspadesxx [2011-08-07 05:17:21 +0000 UTC]
That happens to me a lot. I can start two lines, have to get up and do something. And then five minutes later, I'll sit back down, start writing, look back at it, and think "Wow....this is what this was originally going to be about..." Hahaha
Anyway, It was a very good poem. I liked it; it was straight-forward and honest.
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FallenfromtheStarz In reply to ChamberlainOfRavens [2011-08-07 01:14:58 +0000 UTC]
i really like it.Sorry I should of wrote more.I like the way it isnt the way it was at the beginning.
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ChamberlainOfRavens In reply to FallenfromtheStarz [2011-08-07 01:16:59 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks then, I usually write like this, starting with a set idea that somehow flows into something completely different.
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FallenfromtheStarz In reply to ChamberlainOfRavens [2011-08-07 01:21:52 +0000 UTC]
i know what you mean.I like that thought.Gives a broader view of things i think.To end up ending,and then ending,not how you were supposed to be ending.Kool thought process
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