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Published: 2011-08-07 00:16:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 216; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 4
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Description And I grow weary of this world
One I know about too much
Wondering how can I feel so old
If they say I'm still young and such

And I realize it's plain old cinism
From a mind like mine that sees
All the things out there with sarcasm
Not sure if its worth to be

Alive, anymore, anywhere
'Cause, after all, we're all dead
Inside, because somewhere
In time, we lost hope, we're sad

I'm crude, I'm cold, I'm bold
To the devil, if he's there
My worthless soul is sold
'Tis too much to bear

Call me misanthrope, if you want
But I lost my faith, my creed
In people, in all that is sanct
For me, 'tis only evil seeds

All that is left for me, then
Is to search, to hope, to wait
To finally find my own Eden,
That's where I left my faith
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Comments: 13

SuperGirlSwag [2011-12-22 16:00:31 +0000 UTC]

very interesting poem. deep and sad .
well written

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ChamberlainOfRavens In reply to SuperGirlSwag [2011-12-22 17:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Lalita17 [2011-09-03 15:42:32 +0000 UTC]

this is fantastic~ I love it

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xxacexofxspadesxx [2011-08-07 05:17:21 +0000 UTC]

That happens to me a lot. I can start two lines, have to get up and do something. And then five minutes later, I'll sit back down, start writing, look back at it, and think "Wow....this is what this was originally going to be about..." Hahaha

Anyway, It was a very good poem. I liked it; it was straight-forward and honest.

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ChamberlainOfRavens In reply to xxacexofxspadesxx [2011-08-07 18:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback

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xxacexofxspadesxx In reply to ChamberlainOfRavens [2011-08-07 23:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. It was my pleasure.

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FallenfromtheStarz [2011-08-07 01:04:49 +0000 UTC]

oooooooooo wowss

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ChamberlainOfRavens In reply to FallenfromtheStarz [2011-08-07 01:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Hum, thanks, I guess?

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FallenfromtheStarz In reply to ChamberlainOfRavens [2011-08-07 01:14:58 +0000 UTC]

i really like it.Sorry I should of wrote more.I like the way it isnt the way it was at the beginning.

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ChamberlainOfRavens In reply to FallenfromtheStarz [2011-08-07 01:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks then, I usually write like this, starting with a set idea that somehow flows into something completely different.

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FallenfromtheStarz In reply to ChamberlainOfRavens [2011-08-07 01:21:52 +0000 UTC]

i know what you mean.I like that thought.Gives a broader view of things i think.To end up ending,and then ending,not how you were supposed to be ending.Kool thought process

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ChamberlainOfRavens In reply to FallenfromtheStarz [2011-08-07 01:48:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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FallenfromtheStarz In reply to ChamberlainOfRavens [2011-08-07 01:59:49 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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