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junoXinu [2009-04-17 18:59:49 +0000 UTC]

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If this wasn't traced in any way or RPCed, then it's very good! It's impressive how you use different colored lines to achieve a nice affect. Besides, the shading is very nice. I would've liked to see more of her other pony tail, though, whipping up with the other. Perhaps more loose strands of hair, as well. I also would've added a highlight to her hair, maybe a white or a very light blonde just to give it a bit more "pop". IDK, it looks fine. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
Very nice job, it really fits in with the style of the original.

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chamito448 In reply to junoXinu [2009-04-17 22:42:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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junoXinu In reply to chamito448 [2009-04-17 22:48:15 +0000 UTC]

NP. ^___^ BTW, cute chobits avatar!

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chamito448 In reply to junoXinu [2009-04-17 23:28:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks, just made it a few days ago of a pixel sheet that got of the internet

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junoXinu In reply to chamito448 [2009-04-18 01:12:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Good job! It's really cute! I'm not very good with pixel stuff. >____<

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chamito448 In reply to junoXinu [2009-04-18 02:57:25 +0000 UTC]

I mean I'm not good with pixel either, but I learned how to use photoshop to make animated .gif images but I use a sprite sheet with the characters movements and all you do is copy them then use a frame for each sprite ^_^

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junoXinu In reply to chamito448 [2009-04-18 21:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see. Well, great job, anyway! xD

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chamito448 In reply to junoXinu [2009-04-18 23:00:38 +0000 UTC]

yay

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artsassyn101 [2009-04-27 11:32:51 +0000 UTC]

YAY! YOU COLORED IT!

its good....hey i saw junoxino's critique on it and i thought.....

the lines should be a bit bolder(not thicker) and there should be more highlights with the colors(u got only two shades there) and finally.....the hair...probably the lineart needs a bit adjustment to the hair a bit more strands, you got the shape of the hair but no depth.

better yet,nice one,Chamie

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chamito448 In reply to artsassyn101 [2009-04-27 17:02:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the critique ^_^ I would take that advise on my next vector

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SapphireSky1992 [2009-04-18 04:13:17 +0000 UTC]

this is very nice work^^

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chamito448 In reply to SapphireSky1992 [2009-04-18 06:24:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks amy!

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SapphireSky1992 In reply to chamito448 [2009-04-18 11:10:13 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome^^

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chamito448 In reply to SapphireSky1992 [2009-04-18 16:47:16 +0000 UTC]

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kujiki [2009-04-17 23:55:14 +0000 UTC]

its great! thou the lineart and the chin should be fix a little xD

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PhoenixSylph In reply to kujiki [2009-04-18 03:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Its a vector traced image I believe so i think its a bit diff

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kujiki In reply to PhoenixSylph [2009-04-19 00:58:27 +0000 UTC]

oh i htink its not traced

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PhoenixSylph In reply to kujiki [2009-04-19 18:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Really? But theres a screenshot though that looks exactly the same O_o...I'm prettysure...

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kujiki In reply to PhoenixSylph [2009-04-20 00:27:43 +0000 UTC]

dunno exactly, well it was mentioned there by a critique that it was not traced @@

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PhoenixSylph In reply to kujiki [2009-04-20 00:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Ohh ok. My bad

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kujiki In reply to PhoenixSylph [2009-04-20 13:14:02 +0000 UTC]

oh, its not ur fault XD

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chamito448 In reply to kujiki [2009-04-18 00:43:35 +0000 UTC]

why, what's wrong with it?

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kujiki In reply to chamito448 [2009-04-18 02:04:05 +0000 UTC]

oh the lineart is fine, maybe its not the chin but the cheek...

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chamito448 In reply to kujiki [2009-04-18 02:55:08 +0000 UTC]

yeah I noticed that too, but I think is the shading around the cheeks, you think is that?

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kujiki In reply to chamito448 [2009-04-19 00:59:49 +0000 UTC]

oh, the shading around the cheecks? just noticed it just by now XD... its fine but maybe lessening it would be fine? XD

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chamito448 In reply to kujiki [2009-04-19 03:18:06 +0000 UTC]

ok, I'll add some touches later on, thanks for your help ^_^

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kujiki In reply to chamito448 [2009-04-19 12:13:22 +0000 UTC]

np, looking forward to the update

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chamito448 In reply to kujiki [2009-04-19 16:42:55 +0000 UTC]

ok but don't wait too much ^_^

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kujiki In reply to chamito448 [2009-04-20 00:28:21 +0000 UTC]

okaiiI~~!!

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