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ChanceofClouds — After Battle City pg.10
Published: 2012-04-23 02:04:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1326; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 4
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EDIT: Cut off arm.
Still not in space.
Kancle belongs to *CandleBell
Sarah belongs to ~SBG6
Julia and Ceru belong to *ChanceofClouds
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I like how the ship is set up like a limosene. WHERE'S THE OPEN BAR?! XD
I kinda thought Kancle's right leg in the last pannel looked a wee bit wonky , but I think it's because it's supposed to be bent and there's really nothing one can do about that.
I like how you added the texture to the bread, though realistically Italian bread would probably be wrapped, at least in some kind of plastic. But in that case we wouldn't be able to see the beauty of the bread and maybe SciFi has allowed bread to stay moist without a plastic bag. 8D
I did like how you were able to convey the movement of the robotic arms without being obnoxious about it. But the eye flowed from pannel to pannel and so did the arms, so kudos on that one. I also liked Kancle's expression VERY much, as you expressed her surprise enough that it at least made ME laugh. I was a bit confused as to why Sarah was looking straight in front of her but not at Kancle... then again she was probably looking at something else.
Again, this was a wonderfully done comic! I also liked how you did the proportions between the ship and the monkeys via your angles, to put things in more perspective for the reader.
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It got tossed out to avoid rowdy passengers.
I think I see what you mean about her leg. Maybe it's how the body's positioned that makes it look funky.
Really? I'm not sure if it's Italian bread, but usually when I buy that it just gets tossed into a paper bag. Stays pretty good throughout the day too. 2nd day, only the inside is okay though.
I wasn't sure about the arms, because I really love speed lines, but it's nice to hear what you thought about it. I didn't really notice how Sarah looked until now. 
Hahaha, if only I was sure about the proportions, myself. XDDDD Thanks for all the notes~!
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You are more than welcome, dear!
Well, I don't know where you shop, but most major stores that I have shopped at sold the bread in a plastic bag. The only exception is a restaurant at a resort I work at and they serve their's on plates for room service... but that is supposed to be for one sitting. XD So I guess if they were going to eat the bread THAT DAY then yes, it would be fine. 8D
You are always welcome, dear!
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I buy bread to go at Mr.Lee's and another shop that I don't remember the name of (which is sad, cuz that's the one I was using for reference XD). I've seen bread in plastic bags at Walmart though.
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Hm, good point. I shop at a military store, but I've also been at things like Fresh Markets or something that wrap it in paper bags.
YOUR POINT STANDS.
Here this is a comic and we are talking about bread. XD
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