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Published: 2009-01-11 08:50:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 14523; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 152
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Click Download for full view.Something that originally started out as a quickie sketched comic page, but I got carried away. My sis drew a fun Ronnie vs Drake showdown pic ([link] ), so I totally wanted to do one too. Plus, I haven't drawn any comic pages since graduation, I figured I'd give it a shot. Played around with the layout, angles, spot-blacks and all sorts of stuff like that, things I need practice with. (I wonder if my prof would like it? :3) Oh, and the shading was inspired by another pic of my sis's: [link]
Anywho, this is a little scenario that came out-of-the-blue from my head. Dunno the stuff that came before it, dunno what happens after it. XD And I swear, one of these days I'll draw one where Drake gets it from Ronnie. >_>
Drake & Sammy belong to me.
Ronnie belongs to =fyuvix
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I like the fact the blacks are actually all purplish brown. looks nice!
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Nice! I love the dynamic angles of the layout, they really add to intensity of the scene...and the shading is just terrific.
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-whistles- Well done! I love the angles and dramatic shading
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That is a GREAT comic page. 
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Aw, this is so cool... such great use of shading and full shadows.
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This is such a wonderful comic page! It reminds me Will Eisner in a way. You play with the panel layouts (or lack there-of), and the story continues to flow well across the page, and each panel is understandable. I've seen many times where illustration break boundaries of panels, or panels are juxtaposed for more "flashy" looks, but then the story flow becomes convoluted and confusing.
Your page is wonderfully done!
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Nah, dreadlocks are all knotted and tangled together. A pompadour is just hair curled forward. You know, like Elvis.
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ah man this looks so amazing XD your so good with comics :3 I love the shading on Drake when he's holding his arm XD
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Gah! Vic! This page? So much the win! Your eye moves through the panels perfectly, your black placement is lovely, and I even dig the whole tangent thing happening with the first panel border because you're using the table edge to end the panel. So much fun.
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Eee, yay, I was hoping for a positive Michelle-crit! XD I was just so jealous that Bri was doing all this dynamic comic stuff and my stuff for Pen/Ink I was all lame-o, so I went all-out, haha. :3 I'm glad it worked!
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I love that you used dark brown instead of black. It just looks more . . . retro? I like it. ^_^
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That line, "Aw, that's too bad.... 'Cuz you'll wanna start Praying!!" Is flat out awesome. XD For loss of a better word. I love your comics so much! They have great flow to them.
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Yay, I'm glad you liked the line! I was afraid it'd be too corny, haha.
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Oh Noes!!! ToT Poor Ronnie ... poor Sammy ... poor everybody!!! ;-;
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Dude and the backgrounds are like naiwce dude XD what kinda car is that there? *tom lyle voice* eh? what kinda car is that? XDDDD No seriously though. What is it? XDDD
But yeah and and and. Like. I like the bg outside the garage. and like the hatching, and like the spots on sammy in the last panel are my fave AND YOUR LETTERING MAKES ME CRY CUZ ITS SO AWESDOME like the bubbles that is and stuff, like. shut up XD did you hand draw them? shut up XD
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Heheh, glad you like it, dude!
And I drew the bubbles, the lettering is that Lafayette Comic Pro. Haha, you liked the dialogue? XD I was all like 
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I know right XDD There's no avoiding corny dialogue but I seriously love that kinda crap XD It's hilariously awesome XDDDD It makes me lol in the middle of places!
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Hoooooooooooooooooooooooooooly shit. XD Dude. this super made my day like you wouldn't believe. I totally freaked out in the comp lab, thanks XDDDD LIKE DUDE, THE LIGHTING, AND THE SPOT BLACKS AND THE DYNAMIC LAYOUT get out of my major, jerk! XDDD haha I seriously love this; its seriously your best page you've ever done and seriously that diologue is seriously seriously seriously XD top notch comic action right there. I lol'd hard core, and I can't stop laughing while I'm typing this XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Hooooly crap XD
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Vwat iz it wit da shootzing and ze violence and ze blood?! EH?
Isn't it fun when you mess with your OC's?
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Oh, definitely. After all, if your OCs never have conflict, then they just aren't interesting.
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I'm not really planning on making a page 2, so that's pretty much it. :3
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Awesome angles and panel layout girl!!!! if only it were like 2 pages or 4 or i would beg to use this for my digital coloring assignment ;_; (i really neeed inked pages to color BAD) lol but really awesome job!!!i love the dramaticness and the spot blacks, Great job!
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Yay, thanks so much! So, you taking digital coloring, huh? Hope you're learning lots of stuff, and I'm glad I didn't have to take it, lol.
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lol i am learing channels and i hate it XD
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I love how the panels are organized! *is getting a good lesson from looking at this* xD And look at that atmospheric lighting! *____*
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That's really great! Your panels are magical. This is so sleek.
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Awesome angles. I love the shading on drake in that last panel.
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Wow brilliant action sequence! The angles and shading technique work really well here. Love it
...Is it terrible that both Drake and Ronnie get shot, but I feel most sorry for Sammy?
~ Sheep xx
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Nah, I think I'd feel sorry for Sammy too. *nods* But then, she shouldn't be going out with a guy like that anyway, haha.
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Aww, but love conquers all!
...except maybe gun-shot wounds
Lol, I think Sammy is fast becoming one of my favourite characters of yours
~ Sheep xx
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Darke is a real tough man. Ronie thrown a gun around like a "wanksta" looks so right. The pacing and layout is great. I do really hope that Ronie missed the biracial artery.
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Yeah, I'm sure Ronnie'll be fine. ^__^ Hahaha, wanksta.
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"Wanksta" was a very vogue when I was in High-School; although most of the trouble makers there were "wankstas."
I meant to say that I hope Ronnie's bullet missed Drake's biracial artery, or else Drake will bleed out in a few minutes.
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Haha, I hope neither of them bleed out, to be honest. XD
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Part of me doesn't want to see anyone die; another part wants to see an cessation of evil.
I always like to see the hero end-up chewed up by the end of the story. To me, it confirms that through sheer will anyone can overcome evil, no matter the obstacles.
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he must be ealy fast to shoot him on the stomach because he was taking out his gun :/
i like it ^^
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Yeah, but Drake also got shot in the arm, so perhaps he still fired after Ronnie did. ^___^
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Love the dynamic panels and the shading! Great job!
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You know what, I just remembered seeing a page from another comic with anthropomorphic animal cartoons but adult-ish themes... Unfortunately I can't remember what it was called, but this somehow reminds me of it...
I didn't think you could do action/noir this good!
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Thanks muchly! Yeah, I don't do action scenes very often, but they're fun to do. :3
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You're amazing at it. My action scenes all end up looking kind of static... and I'm terrible at shading.
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