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GrowlyLobita [2009-03-01 03:26:46 +0000 UTC]
I like the fact the blacks are actually all purplish brown. looks nice!
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Saetje [2009-02-14 04:07:47 +0000 UTC]
Nice! I love the dynamic angles of the layout, they really add to intensity of the scene...and the shading is just terrific.
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FlockofFlamingos [2009-01-16 03:47:43 +0000 UTC]
Aw, this is so cool... such great use of shading and full shadows.
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JesseAcosta [2009-01-15 06:40:17 +0000 UTC]
This is such a wonderful comic page! It reminds me Will Eisner in a way. You play with the panel layouts (or lack there-of), and the story continues to flow well across the page, and each panel is understandable. I've seen many times where illustration break boundaries of panels, or panels are juxtaposed for more "flashy" looks, but then the story flow becomes convoluted and confusing.
Your page is wonderfully done!
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Chelo-kun [2009-01-12 20:09:55 +0000 UTC]
Is a pompadore like one big dreadlock?
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ChaosKomori In reply to Chelo-kun [2009-01-13 00:00:14 +0000 UTC]
Nah, dreadlocks are all knotted and tangled together. A pompadour is just hair curled forward. You know, like Elvis.
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whiskey-lullaby [2009-01-12 18:24:37 +0000 UTC]
ah man this looks so amazing XD your so good with comics :3 I love the shading on Drake when he's holding his arm XD
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leechi-nut [2009-01-12 01:59:51 +0000 UTC]
Gah! Vic! This page? So much the win! Your eye moves through the panels perfectly, your black placement is lovely, and I even dig the whole tangent thing happening with the first panel border because you're using the table edge to end the panel. So much fun.
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ChaosKomori In reply to leechi-nut [2009-01-12 19:28:06 +0000 UTC]
Eee, yay, I was hoping for a positive Michelle-crit! XD I was just so jealous that Bri was doing all this dynamic comic stuff and my stuff for Pen/Ink I was all lame-o, so I went all-out, haha. :3 I'm glad it worked!
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tashni [2009-01-12 00:22:41 +0000 UTC]
I love that you used dark brown instead of black. It just looks more . . . retro? I like it. ^_^
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ReiHari [2009-01-11 23:35:47 +0000 UTC]
That line, "Aw, that's too bad.... 'Cuz you'll wanna start Praying!!" Is flat out awesome. XD For loss of a better word. I love your comics so much! They have great flow to them.
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ChaosKomori In reply to ReiHari [2009-01-14 00:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Yay, I'm glad you liked the line! I was afraid it'd be too corny, haha.
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BubonicDoctor [2009-01-11 23:16:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh Noes!!! ToT Poor Ronnie ... poor Sammy ... poor everybody!!! ;-;
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ThirdPotato [2009-01-11 20:42:45 +0000 UTC]
Dude and the backgrounds are like naiwce dude XD what kinda car is that there? *tom lyle voice* eh? what kinda car is that? XDDDD No seriously though. What is it? XDDD
But yeah and and and. Like. I like the bg outside the garage. and like the hatching, and like the spots on sammy in the last panel are my fave AND YOUR LETTERING MAKES ME CRY CUZ ITS SO AWESDOME like the bubbles that is and stuff, like. shut up XD did you hand draw them? shut up XD
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ThirdPotato In reply to ChaosKomori [2009-01-11 23:28:22 +0000 UTC]
I know right XDD There's no avoiding corny dialogue but I seriously love that kinda crap XD It's hilariously awesome XDDDD It makes me lol in the middle of places!
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ThirdPotato [2009-01-11 20:40:41 +0000 UTC]
Hoooooooooooooooooooooooooooly shit. XD Dude. this super made my day like you wouldn't believe. I totally freaked out in the comp lab, thanks XDDDD LIKE DUDE, THE LIGHTING, AND THE SPOT BLACKS AND THE DYNAMIC LAYOUT get out of my major, jerk! XDDD haha I seriously love this; its seriously your best page you've ever done and seriously that diologue is seriously seriously seriously XD top notch comic action right there. I lol'd hard core, and I can't stop laughing while I'm typing this XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Hooooly crap XD
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Dark-Mightyena [2009-01-11 18:54:33 +0000 UTC]
Whoa is that it or will there be a page two?
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ChaosKomori In reply to Dark-Mightyena [2009-01-11 19:37:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm not really planning on making a page 2, so that's pretty much it. :3
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PuppyAkamaru [2009-01-11 18:44:00 +0000 UTC]
whoah, drama man. i love Ronnie's teeth. ^^
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OhSadface [2009-01-11 18:33:38 +0000 UTC]
Awesome angles and panel layout girl!!!! if only it were like 2 pages or 4 or i would beg to use this for my digital coloring assignment ;_; (i really neeed inked pages to color BAD) lol but really awesome job!!!i love the dramaticness and the spot blacks, Great job!
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ChaosKomori In reply to OhSadface [2009-01-12 19:26:15 +0000 UTC]
Yay, thanks so much! So, you taking digital coloring, huh? Hope you're learning lots of stuff, and I'm glad I didn't have to take it, lol.
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OhSadface In reply to ChaosKomori [2009-01-15 02:24:14 +0000 UTC]
lol i am learing channels and i hate it XD
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CookiePhantom [2009-01-11 18:22:11 +0000 UTC]
I love how the panels are organized! *is getting a good lesson from looking at this* xD And look at that atmospheric lighting! *____*
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ChaosKomori In reply to ShoJoJim [2009-01-12 19:23:32 +0000 UTC]
Magical? Eee, thanks! X3
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hotoffthesketchbook [2009-01-11 17:36:30 +0000 UTC]
Awesome angles. I love the shading on drake in that last panel.
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ChaosKomori In reply to Sockless-Sheep [2009-01-12 19:23:19 +0000 UTC]
Nah, I think I'd feel sorry for Sammy too. *nods* But then, she shouldn't be going out with a guy like that anyway, haha.
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messman [2009-01-11 16:46:47 +0000 UTC]
Darke is a real tough man. Ronie thrown a gun around like a "wanksta" looks so right. The pacing and layout is great. I do really hope that Ronie missed the biracial artery.
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ChaosKomori In reply to messman [2009-01-12 19:22:46 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I'm sure Ronnie'll be fine. ^__^ Hahaha, wanksta.
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messman In reply to ChaosKomori [2009-01-12 19:53:58 +0000 UTC]
"Wanksta" was a very vogue when I was in High-School; although most of the trouble makers there were "wankstas."
I meant to say that I hope Ronnie's bullet missed Drake's biracial artery, or else Drake will bleed out in a few minutes.
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ChaosKomori In reply to messman [2009-01-13 00:15:13 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I hope neither of them bleed out, to be honest. XD
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messman In reply to ChaosKomori [2009-01-13 00:24:35 +0000 UTC]
Part of me doesn't want to see anyone die; another part wants to see an cessation of evil.
I always like to see the hero end-up chewed up by the end of the story. To me, it confirms that through sheer will anyone can overcome evil, no matter the obstacles.
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GabrieldlTC [2009-01-11 16:37:39 +0000 UTC]
he must be ealy fast to shoot him on the stomach because he was taking out his gun :/
i like it ^^
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ChaosKomori In reply to GabrieldlTC [2009-01-11 19:16:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but Drake also got shot in the arm, so perhaps he still fired after Ronnie did. ^___^
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gerardway156 [2009-01-11 16:19:57 +0000 UTC]
Love the dynamic panels and the shading! Great job!
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Saladchan [2009-01-11 15:57:24 +0000 UTC]
You know what, I just remembered seeing a page from another comic with anthropomorphic animal cartoons but adult-ish themes... Unfortunately I can't remember what it was called, but this somehow reminds me of it...
I didn't think you could do action/noir this good!
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ChaosKomori In reply to Saladchan [2009-01-11 19:35:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks muchly! Yeah, I don't do action scenes very often, but they're fun to do. :3
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Saladchan In reply to ChaosKomori [2009-01-11 22:14:00 +0000 UTC]
You're amazing at it. My action scenes all end up looking kind of static... and I'm terrible at shading.
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