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chaoticsin — We Are the Knights
Published: 2010-12-17 01:52:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description In a battle long waged
we continue the fight.
Through hours of darkness
and hours of the light.
The clashing of steel,
the breaking of bone.
Protecting the Kingdom,
we shan't fight alone.
Upholding all justice
and defending whats right.
Together we stand,
we are the Knights.
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Comments: 5

DizzyTestament [2010-12-17 05:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Good to hear from you again.

This is good. The only thing that bothers me is the rhythm gets lost in the last line or so. It feels like it shortens abruptly. Other than that, i really like this.

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chaoticsin In reply to DizzyTestament [2010-12-20 04:24:57 +0000 UTC]

It does seem to drop at the end. But I can always go back if I ever think of anything to add. And thanks.

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SilverFox17 [2010-12-17 02:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Dude! You're alive!

Also. I like this

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chaoticsin In reply to SilverFox17 [2010-12-19 05:14:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, its been awhile. Military life takes a lot of time. And thanks.

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SilverFox17 In reply to chaoticsin [2010-12-19 17:07:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry D=

And no prob n.n

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