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chaoticsin — Your Will be Done
Published: 2007-11-09 02:10:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description The spell has now fallen,
and it is too late.
Even if I wished to
I could not escape.
Their warnings were futile,
for the damage was done.
I can never deny you;
Let your will be done.
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Comments: 8

Greeneyes616 [2007-11-09 14:38:05 +0000 UTC]

I think its lovely, I wish I could write poetry very well at least

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chaoticsin In reply to Greeneyes616 [2007-11-09 19:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks,but it isn't one my better ones....

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Greeneyes616 In reply to chaoticsin [2007-11-09 20:03:05 +0000 UTC]

its still pretty

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chaoticsin In reply to Greeneyes616 [2007-11-10 02:11:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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SilverFox17 [2007-11-09 03:51:55 +0000 UTC]

hmm.... not bad.

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chaoticsin In reply to SilverFox17 [2007-11-09 19:40:20 +0000 UTC]

I think it kinda sucks. I forced it just a little bit,and I'm slightly disappointed with myself...Thanks,though

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SilverFox17 In reply to chaoticsin [2007-11-10 07:35:51 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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chaoticsin In reply to SilverFox17 [2007-11-10 07:37:05 +0000 UTC]

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