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Meet the winner, Snakestar and the runner up, Foxstar!Biography:
-Foxstar
GENERAL
Name(s):
Fox(loner)
Foxpaw(apprentice)
Foxfur(warrior)
Foxstar(leader)
Age:
78 moons
Gender: Male (tom)
Clan: Currentclan
Rank: Leader
PHYSIQUE
Fur:
Bright orange tabby pelt. Unlike his fellow clan mates, Foxstar stands out in the undergrowth like a sore thumb.
Eyes: Left eye is yellow, right eye is blue.
Body structure:
Small tom with short stocky legs.
Summary:
Foxstar is a small short legged tom, with a large bushy tail, long ears, and pink nose.
PERSONA
Likes:
- teasing Snakestar
- fishing
- sunset patrols
- grooming elders (for the stories of course!)
- shells
Dislikes:
- Snakestar
- Gatherings (they are very far away and hard to get to)
- Stormy weather
- Crabs
- His height
Strengths:
- His quickness
- He is a hard target to hit due to his size
- Cliff climbing
- Quick thinker
- Clever
Weaknesses:
- His temper
- Too suspicious
- Over thinks things
- No confidence
- Rude
Fears:
- Floods
- Lightning
- Rock falls
- Waves
Flaws:
- Short
- Asshole
- Grumpy
- Doesn't understand the emotions of She-cats
SUMMARY A couple sentence summary of your cat's personality. [100+ words] N/A
REFLECTION
Mother: N/A
Father: N/A
Brothers: N/A
Sisters: N/A
Mate: Wishbreeze
Kits: Flamekit(m) ,Scalekit(m) and Featherkit(f)
HISTORY A paragraph or two describing the history of your cat. [200+ words] N/A
To be continued...
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Biography:
-Snakestar
GENERAL
Name(s):
Snakekit
Snakepaw
SnaketailSnakestar
Age:
86 moons
Gender: Male (tom)
Clan: Poisonclan
Rank: Leader
PHYSIQUE
Fur: Light brown tabby.
Eyes: Acidic green eyes
Body structure: Long thin legs, short solid body, narrow face.
Summary: Snakestar is a tall, thin tom, fluffed up cheek tufts, dangerous eyes and long canines.
PERSONA
Likes:
- teasing Foxstar
- family time
- frogs
- training apprentices
- digging
Dislikes:
- duskclan
- disobedience
- not getting his way
- his short tail
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Strengths:
- manipulative
- sweet talker
- his looks
- his size
- leadership
Weaknesses:
- doesn't make good decisions sometimes
- fights a lot
- breaks promises
- lies
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Fears:
- Mud slides
- Badgers
- Sickness
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Flaws:
- trips over his own paws
- stumbles over words
- deaf in one ear
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SUMMARY A couple sentence summary of your cat's personality. [100+ words] N/A
REFLECTION
Mother: Briarpetal
Father: Buzzardswoop
Brothers: Brokenweb (medicine cat) and Silentsnow/Bloodbroken (deputy)
Sisters: N/A
Mate: Fernwhisker
Kits: Beetlepaw (m), Shardpaw (f) and Muddyleaf (f)
HISTORY A paragraph or two describing the history of your cat. [200+ words] N/A
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Comments: 38
I SHIP IT!! You gotta draw em together again cause of my shipping needs ;-;
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A ginger tom that joined the clan as an apprentice, and eventually became leader...? I could swear I've heard this story before...
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A cat called Herringleap found him after his mother died, he was still a kit, who stayed in the nursery until he was old enough to get his apprentice name.
That why it's a good thing he isn't the main character of the story now isn't it??
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So, the story is different!
Yeah, you'd probably get a lot of criticism if he was the main character.
I hope you realize I'm just messing with you...
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"Eyes: Right eye is yellow, left eye is blue."
Then you have his eyes backwards on the drawing; it should be blue.
Just pointing that out
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Whoops! Sorry I'm a little dyslexic xD I'll fix it later!!
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Okay! And it's fine, it's not really something you control ^^
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Nope, it's put there right.
She's supposed to do the right eye yellow.
Learn your freakin' pathways -.-''
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Nope. See, imagine yourself as this character, and your head is turned that way. Your left eye is yellow if it is colored like that. If you faced forward and looked at yourself, the yellow eye would be on the right, but be on the left eye. Look at this realistically.
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No his left eye in the picture is yellow. Cover your left eye and turn the same direction as the cat, it's backwards.
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Maaahhhh
I'm so lazy Idc ;-;
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ahaha looks like snakestar is a bit too up himself >U<
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Omg Idk whose more smexy ;n;
SnakeStar or FoxStar
SnakeStar or FoxStar
Snake..or....
GAH I CANT CHOOSE COALEH HELP ME!!
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Hmmm... decisions, decisions..
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Ik I still cant choose and its been like 2 days xD
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Ooh, I like!
Grow back? Does losing his tail have something to do with his ruined relationship with Goldenstar...?
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Nah, lil ol Snakestar just got his tail bitten off by a badger ;u; So he's extremely conscious about it, he's warrior name was originally Snaketail, so he was proud of it being the reason for his warrior name and all, and when he lost it he felt belittled and empty. So to make himself feel better about his sad pathetic self, he picks on little baby Foxstar, and comments and teases him on 'his' insecurities, his height! x'D
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I love the dynamic in between the chaarcters XD Amazing expressions!
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x'D they are basically in love with one another and don't know it yet! haha!
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