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Published: 2009-04-20 17:28:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 2551; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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Description Lilith of Aeon Chronicles. Just threw in a quick background to see what she would look like against it. Ill add more detail to it soon to try and finish it off.
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WhiteHowler7 [2009-04-23 02:25:48 +0000 UTC]

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So I've actually seen the piece from Rod that started you out with this color scheme, but I think it might be a better idea for you to go more high noon with it. that just means brighter sky, less red rocks.

one thing you've got to kep in mind when you give it a full go at the background is the rocks, right now they're quickly sketched and thats cool, but you gotta make sure they dont come across soft in the final version. that means hard edged brush, not soft one. one thing that helps me with rocks is using the brush shape changer in brush settings to bring the dots together so the brush is flatter and becomes more of an oval or palette knife shape. some texture wont hurt when you're done too.

for the character, one thing i notice about your work is it also appears very soft all around, you should experiment with some sharper edges as well as cast shadows.

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charligal In reply to WhiteHowler7 [2009-04-23 02:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. That makes much more sense to do. That is extremely helpful and i now have a bit of direction for this piece.
Thanks for the tips, i will definitely give them a go and try more sharper shadows too.
Cheers!!

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WhiteHowler7 In reply to charligal [2009-04-23 02:50:16 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome

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charligal In reply to WhiteHowler7 [2009-04-23 03:03:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm trying out some stuff right now!! Cant thank you enough for being so helpful. Ur tips have helped me improve a hell of a lot over the last year.

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WhiteHowler7 In reply to charligal [2009-04-23 03:05:27 +0000 UTC]

any time

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charligal In reply to WhiteHowler7 [2009-04-23 03:55:14 +0000 UTC]

[link] gift art for you Enjoy.

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WhiteHowler7 In reply to charligal [2009-04-23 04:03:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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charligal In reply to WhiteHowler7 [2009-04-23 04:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Any time

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Kakumei-Tifa [2010-09-22 16:59:59 +0000 UTC]

very nice!

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charligal In reply to Kakumei-Tifa [2010-09-22 22:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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dangelus [2009-04-23 12:43:13 +0000 UTC]

damage the background isn't finished... but the woman is Miam! ^^

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charligal In reply to dangelus [2009-04-24 02:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Im still trying to figure out the bg... its coming along.
Glad u like Lilith.

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dangelus In reply to charligal [2009-04-24 06:57:52 +0000 UTC]

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ParisAlleyne [2009-04-23 02:34:09 +0000 UTC]

who did the lines for this piece?

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charligal In reply to ParisAlleyne [2009-04-23 02:41:40 +0000 UTC]

I did them [link]

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ParisAlleyne In reply to charligal [2009-04-23 02:49:25 +0000 UTC]

oh cool
thanks; I didn't expect a response so soon

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charligal In reply to ParisAlleyne [2009-04-23 02:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe No worries my friend. It usually shocks ppl that im the pencillist and colourist... dont know why...

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ParisAlleyne In reply to charligal [2009-04-23 03:08:37 +0000 UTC]

it's... uncommon
but ohh if I could colour my own pictures...
the possibilities

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charligal In reply to ParisAlleyne [2009-04-23 03:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Well when u have ppl like Nei Ruffino giving u tips on how to get better it helps a lot. She is amazing.

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ParisAlleyne In reply to charligal [2009-04-23 03:36:39 +0000 UTC]

so i've heard
But i can't dabble currently because i lost my tablet pen in Germany!
of all places
I live in canada and was coming from france
damn connecting flights

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charligal In reply to ParisAlleyne [2009-04-23 04:02:13 +0000 UTC]

That really sucks Can you get it replaced?

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ParisAlleyne In reply to charligal [2009-04-23 10:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Don't have money

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charligal In reply to ParisAlleyne [2009-04-23 10:23:01 +0000 UTC]

That really bites.

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jyunogozen [2009-04-20 18:29:58 +0000 UTC]

the back ground is odd

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charligal In reply to jyunogozen [2009-04-21 03:44:30 +0000 UTC]

I have no ideas of what to do for the background and the only other pictures ive seen of her have been ina deserty bg similar to this one. [link] It still needs finishing too which is why i added the critique option.

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jyunogozen In reply to charligal [2009-04-21 04:10:33 +0000 UTC]

hmm i see more viking scene to it, like maybe the ocean or a temple of sorts

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charligal In reply to jyunogozen [2009-04-21 06:15:22 +0000 UTC]

Well from what ive gathered so far it has more of a slightly biblical theme to it and the pics ive seen of her are with a deserty backdrop so im just going with it. I might try a temple though, that sounds like it could go with the theme.

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jyunogozen In reply to charligal [2009-04-21 06:48:51 +0000 UTC]

ah well i think you should go with what you think is right for it

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charligal In reply to jyunogozen [2009-04-21 16:15:28 +0000 UTC]

I still dont know whats right for it. Shes in the right position for lounging on a bed or something... ill have to try a few different things.

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jyunogozen In reply to charligal [2009-04-21 18:24:40 +0000 UTC]

that is all you can do right lol

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charligal In reply to jyunogozen [2009-04-22 03:53:57 +0000 UTC]

I just got a response from the art director saying its a Conan type setting all medieval and stuff so thats really helpful. I think i might do a bedroomish bg with lotsa cushions and veils and drapery.

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jyunogozen In reply to charligal [2009-04-22 04:00:57 +0000 UTC]

ooo that would work

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charligal In reply to jyunogozen [2009-04-22 04:15:05 +0000 UTC]

I just have to do it now And i have to colour Methuselah and Oblivion. The Art director likes my drawing and colouring style YAY! Im excited. Hopefully I get the gig.

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jyunogozen In reply to charligal [2009-04-22 04:18:16 +0000 UTC]

lol

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charligal In reply to jyunogozen [2009-04-22 04:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Its all very exciting.

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jyunogozen In reply to charligal [2009-04-22 04:55:33 +0000 UTC]

hehe art can be exciting

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charligal In reply to jyunogozen [2009-04-22 05:33:18 +0000 UTC]

It most certainly can A famous colourist just coloured one of my line arts. She has been my idol for a very long time.

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jyunogozen In reply to charligal [2009-04-22 06:34:11 +0000 UTC]

Really, that freaken awesome

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charligal In reply to jyunogozen [2009-04-22 06:49:24 +0000 UTC]

yup

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