ivan-5252 [2003-07-23 03:30:53 +0000 UTC]
hah..same thing as wat she^ said bout the "stare" thing. *off to the next poem..*
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kentuski [2003-04-19 17:35:05 +0000 UTC]
This is really good! I read the whole thing! ^^ The only thing is that on the second stanza in the middle where is says, "Why do they stair?" it should be "Why do they stare?" That's all, I luv the poem!