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Short story to it:

Naruto and Hinata had just been on the most hectic date
they'll ever have...

...and it all started when Naruto forgot to bring his wallet
to pay for their luxurious dinner - which he planned for
days so that it'd go perfectly. And Hinata was a bit
uncomfortable about his dedication to their very first date,
located at the farthest corner of Konoha where many
aristocrats, the privileged, and other upper-class men
gather and mingle. Yet it was undeniably impressive -
something unexpected, yet expected from the unpredictable
knucklehead of the village.

Some troubles here, some rampage there, and some
chaos everywhere...and along the way, new friends were
made - one of them being a nobleman who, to both
Naruto's and Hinata's discomfort, was a fan of Jiraiya's
books and the toad sage himself.

And even with all the disarray, the couple still managed to
have time for...

romance.

Well, that's what Hinata sees it as (and she might've even
seen Naruto blush once!). They held hands most of the
time - mostly because she couldn't keep up with Naruto
while they ran from angry mobs, considering the fact that
she was wearing a dress and high heels.

And Naruto had to keep Hinata in his arms and hold her
tight (because they were hiding in the shadows and had to
keep quiet).

Some more troubles here, some more rampage there,
and some more chaos everywhere. And Naruto somehow
managed to make his left arm bleed after going through
the forest. He felt guilty after Hinata tore up the hem of her
dress to use as the bandage they lacked. She felt colder
after that, and as he saw her shiver, he gave her his
sweater. (Yes, gave, not offered).

Naruto sighed as he slumped back on the training post.
(To think that they ran all the way from the corner of
Konoha to the training grounds). He looked over to Hinata.

Despite all the trouble they got into, she still managed to
remain the beautiful angel she was. He apologized to
Hinata for messing up their date so badly. To his surprise,
she scooted next to him and leaned on his chest. Out of
her mouth, she had barely whispered the words that
made the night so special and wonderful that he had
almost forgotten that he screwed it up.

"As long as it was with you, Naruto-kun...it was a perfect
night."

Okay, that sounded a bit corny, but it was the first time
anyone had appreciated him and his faults that way. He
hugged her back and rested his head on the top of hers,
cherishing the moment he was sharing with the one girl
who he can count on to be there for him.

Thinking about it now, he guessed that everything that
happened today were all worth it.

Yeah...contest entry in the Naruto Forums.
And it won

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Description
Short story to it:

Naruto and Hinata had just been on the most hectic date
they'll ever have...

...and it all started when Naruto forgot to bring his wallet
to pay for their luxurious dinner - which he planned for
days so that it'd go perfectly. And Hinata was a bit
uncomfortable about his dedication to their very first date,
located at the farthest corner of Konoha where many
aristocrats, the privileged, and other upper-class men
gather and mingle. Yet it was undeniably impressive -
something unexpected, yet expected from the unpredictable
knucklehead of the village.

Some troubles here, some rampage there, and some
chaos everywhere...and along the way, new friends were
made - one of them being a nobleman who, to both
Naruto's and Hinata's discomfort, was a fan of Jiraiya's
books and the toad sage himself.

And even with all the disarray, the couple still managed to
have time for...

romance.

Well, that's what Hinata sees it as (and she might've even
seen Naruto blush once!). They held hands most of the
time - mostly because she couldn't keep up with Naruto
while they ran from angry mobs, considering the fact that
she was wearing a dress and high heels.

And Naruto had to keep Hinata in his arms and hold her
tight (because they were hiding in the shadows and had to
keep quiet).

Some more troubles here, some more rampage there,
and some more chaos everywhere. And Naruto somehow
managed to make his left arm bleed after going through
the forest. He felt guilty after Hinata tore up the hem of her
dress to use as the bandage they lacked. She felt colder
after that, and as he saw her shiver, he gave her his
sweater. (Yes, gave, not offered).

Naruto sighed as he slumped back on the training post.
(To think that they ran all the way from the corner of
Konoha to the training grounds). He looked over to Hinata.

Despite all the trouble they got into, she still managed to
remain the beautiful angel she was. He apologized to
Hinata for messing up their date so badly. To his surprise,
she scooted next to him and leaned on his chest. Out of
her mouth, she had barely whispered the words that
made the night so special and wonderful that he had
almost forgotten that he screwed it up.

"As long as it was with you, Naruto-kun...it was a perfect
night."

Okay, that sounded a bit corny, but it was the first time
anyone had appreciated him and his faults that way. He
hugged her back and rested his head on the top of hers,
cherishing the moment he was sharing with the one girl
who he can count on to be there for him.

Thinking about it now, he guessed that everything that
happened today were all worth it.

Yeah...contest entry in the Naruto Forums.
And it won

FEEL FREE TO COLOR.
MAKE SURE TO CREDIT ME.