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Chauvels In reply to SteamyStefano [2015-12-13 20:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Combination of twos and ones. I've been trying to experiment more using both.

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SteamyStefano In reply to Chauvels [2015-12-13 21:44:10 +0000 UTC]

my first thought was that it was made without a combination. for some reason it feels too homogeneous, movement  and speed wise. you could delete the in-betweens where the pillow springs up to jump and bends down upon landing, maybe substitute them with smears.
also the pillow's "legs" sort of dangle in the air just before landing, making it feel less like a jump and more like it's doing an invisible pararrel bar exercize.

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Chauvels In reply to SteamyStefano [2015-12-14 19:39:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the helpful advice! Might change a few things you've mentioned here and there to try to improve it.

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