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Published: 2010-06-26 08:07:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 26766; Favourites: 349; Downloads: 0
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(Edit: I wasn't content with the first layout pass, so I did another pass on the right side.)Here's a tight rough of a Shazam commission I'm working on tonight.
Gonna clean-up the pencils soon.
Hope y'all digs!
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Always admiring your works, you've been a great inspiration.. I like the one on the right, but personally, for the Captain Marvel, I think having an angle that is looking up at him would work better.. as to give him a superior, almost a god like appearance.. but that's just my personal thought.. Anyway, can't wait to see the finished version of this..
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Definitely digging the layout on the right more. Looking forward to the finished product!
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Very cool layout. Cap M. is one of the greatest unsung heroes.
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Nice. Looking forward to seeing it finished.
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Looking good so far, can't wait to see it finished, it's looking great
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Get to see the big switch of Billy Batson to CM eh? All I can say is, best transformation ever!
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I like the layout on the left a bit more, Billy is kinda overshadowing the Big Cheese on the right too much, with him being the biggest element in the foreground(and having a big profile shot of him in the background). Just my take on it, man ^^
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Love seeing your sketches Sean - I definitely learn from your in progress stuff!
I do like the left one a bit more than the right (the poses mesh together more).
A Shazam rendition like this hasn't been as highly-anticipated since Mike Kunkel
took a stab at it! Good luck for the finish!
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Must confess, the left-hand side composition looks better to me, more dynamic and in the SHAZAM spirit, to boot.
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I like the composition of the one on the right a lot, and I like the slight tilt of the profile view of the head on the left. Mix them and it's golden
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How many pages do you draw in a day Sean-san ?Looks that you draw it so faster ,envy your skills 
*sorry for my bad english*
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The sleek and dynamic Captain Marvel is interesting. Off the top of my head I can't think of seeing him drawn any way other than super bulky. I like it though, it's different and it defiantly works with his demeanor. It's fantastic.
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looking forward to this piece Sean! I wish when I was a kid I had that sort of power, wait I still do haha! for the good of mankind of course. :insert evil icon here:
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Wow Sean, you must've been up late! I'm liking the new pass although It may be just a little bit too crowded... I'm sure it will come out fine when its coloured and there's some distance between the characters though... I like the new pose for the kid, he seems more innocent... having said that though, there is not as much connection between the the two characters so its less likely to read that they are the same person... but thats only for people that don't know the comic... Any way... sorry about the comment, I didn't get much sleep last night either
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Yea...I think I like the one on the right a bit better...it's more balanced
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like the composition on the left...the one on the right is fine as well but I would have the captain image in a different pose, more of a heroic up shot looking at him w/ cape flowing etc...almost as if Billy were thinking or dreaming of his alter ego...nicely done man.
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Why the hell aren't you like, drawing a Marvel or DC book yet?
Wait.... Are you? And if so, which book(s) because ima 'bout to go hunt them down
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Sweet, I'm soooo eager to see the finished version
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I like both roughs, each one changes the focus from one character to another.
Thanks for the favorites too Sean!
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Sweetness! I almost want to see the the 'adult Shazam as the largest image even though he's in the middle ground because it such a nice pose, but loving the F/G billy and background head shot too( maybe a back to back headshot comparison!). Looking forward to seeing it all worked up! Fun stuff as always!
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i've always had a soft spot for shaz...looking forward to seeing the finalz! ^_^
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I like the first one better, personally. But they both look great and I'm excited to see this one finished!
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Digging the one on the right a lot. Nice improvement.
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Great ! I like the WIP's and the composition process !
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Great work! Personally I think that the first composition looked better. Maybe you just need to do some minor improvements to it. Congratulations!
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Daamn awesome dude, final version is gonna be effin cool xD
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said it before and i'll say it again.. this character needs his own animated series. this looks great man. can't wait to see it finished.
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he sure does and thank you!
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you're an inspiration, sir!
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OHHHH MAN, I am excited to see this one, Sean. Lovin' it already.
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