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LpsCandy556k [2013-08-23 03:14:35 +0000 UTC]
I love this XD
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cheesefred In reply to wis13 [2009-05-10 06:48:42 +0000 UTC]
Thankies! XD
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cheesefred In reply to BlaksamuraiX [2009-05-09 05:34:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I had a quick browse of your characters and they're pretty good for someone your age. I have a couple of reccomendations for you though if you're serious about getting into manga.
1. Stop drawing on lined paper, it ruins the picture and you rely too much on the lines to help size your charatcers.
2. For each character, draw up a charcter sheet like i did so you get used to drawing them more than once and you can see what they look like from all angles.
3. Write a short bio on each character about their likes, dislikes, personality etc. They only way to make a good chracter is to know them as well as you know yourself.
4. Think about everything when you design them, and why. Your outfits are cool but make sure you have a reason for giving them certain things. For exammple, Rapunzel's outfit was based on a mix between pirates clothes and 18 century ladies dresses, she has pink in relation to the fact she's a princess, shoulderpads because she would be groomed by her father to be a captain, even her belt buckle has a crown on it because she's royalty. Never put things on a charcter just because they look cool, or if you do at least make something up for why they have it. It'll keep your characters consistent.
Sorry the comment was so long but i think you have potential and this will help you. Have fun! ^___^
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cheesefred In reply to BlaksamuraiX [2009-05-10 06:54:47 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
Your seemed to have alot of characters though. I'm not sure if they're all from the same story but i'd reccomend choosing the four of five main ones and drawing some other scenes with them doing everyday things they might do like eating or brushing their hair, just so you can distinguish the differences between them, as you would know people don't often do things the same way. How they do even menial things reflect on their personality.
It's nice to hear someone take advice so easily in stride though to kudos. XD
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