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cheesy109 — A day of Haiku
Published: 2005-04-17 04:57:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 67; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description   Look forward to Spring.
Rain falling gently downward.
  Jump in the puddles.

                                              Tears like the movies.
                                            But where has the popcorn gone?
                                               I'll just have nachos.

  Your zipper is down.
Please pull it up now or later.
  I would prefer now.

                                              You try to tickle.
                                          But your attempts are feeble.
                                             I don't want to laugh.
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Comments: 2

hope-unknown [2005-12-18 05:54:24 +0000 UTC]

please pull it up now or later is 8 syllables. just letting you know.

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cheesy109 In reply to hope-unknown [2005-12-18 17:44:46 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks.

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