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CheesyCrocs — PMD: LS + FP Mission 4 Pt 1-1

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And here we are folks, the beginning of Mission 4 for Team LoveShock! Man I am so excited to get this mission going, I tell you what. All sorts of crazy stuff's gonna go down and it's gonna be a blast HEH.

So for this mission I wanted to try and do some improvements in my drawing. For instance, I wanted to do more detailed backgrounds and I'm gonna try and get my line weights a little more varied here too. Though I hope by drawing more detailed backgrounds it doesn't make the images too busy! Lemme know if it does guys or if you have any other critiques on it too that'd be swell.
The only downside to all this is I think the quality of the word balloons are gonna be down considering I can't quite fit all the text in a neat little marquee tool bubble, so I have to draw em all out by myself. Ah well I will try to make em look good!
WOW OKAY stop babblin and get to the story! GOSH anyways yeah lookit little Ringo bein all responsible and going out for training! What a big step that little fella's taking. ;m; Also say hi and bye to little Jane, cause it's the last time you'll see her throughout this comic haha

Oh did I mention I'm collaborating with someone on this? We shall see the team in a couple of pages hehee
GOD CAN THIS DESCRIPTION BE ANY LONGER okay I'm gonna quit now

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Comments: 25

MiyakuBubbles [2011-10-25 13:45:18 +0000 UTC]

It seems that Master Foo was just waiting to do that to the next person who entered. xD

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CheesyCrocs In reply to MiyakuBubbles [2011-10-25 13:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah he was bored. I mean it's snowing and nobody was really stopping by so why not heehee

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juana-the-hedchidna [2011-10-25 12:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh god, your style looks so GORGEOUS *w*

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CheesyCrocs In reply to juana-the-hedchidna [2011-10-25 13:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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KatIsConfused [2011-10-25 08:14:23 +0000 UTC]

I see Ringo is round again

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CheesyCrocs In reply to KatIsConfused [2011-10-25 13:37:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I mean I like drawing him both ways but I'm just so used to him being a little fluffball. u__u

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KatIsConfused In reply to CheesyCrocs [2011-10-25 13:37:40 +0000 UTC]

I like him better this way tbh <-<
SQUISHY *hug*

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CheesyCrocs In reply to KatIsConfused [2011-10-25 13:44:08 +0000 UTC]

hahaha it's understandable :V

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KatIsConfused In reply to CheesyCrocs [2011-10-25 13:47:29 +0000 UTC]

You can always make him have an actual head when/if you evolve him anyway.

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CheesyCrocs In reply to KatIsConfused [2011-10-25 16:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I'll be messing around with his evolved form for quite a bit.

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HakaiAkumu [2011-10-25 00:10:28 +0000 UTC]

go go go Ringo! it feels like he's growing up :3

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CheesyCrocs In reply to HakaiAkumu [2011-10-25 00:59:09 +0000 UTC]

I remember when he was just a tiny baby lad ;m; they grow up too fast!!

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FairWeatherStorms [2011-10-25 00:00:20 +0000 UTC]

First thing I saw this page was that Ringo was a fluffy lil ball again. Is he going to be evolving this mission? : O

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CheesyCrocs In reply to FairWeatherStorms [2011-10-25 00:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Not during the actual mission, no. I've once again dived into the perpetual tunnel of insecurity in wanting to evolve little Ringo. I want to cause I wanna draw him as a clefable and have it be canon and also just to make him grow emotionally and characteristically. Cause I mean sure he's that little lady killer he wishes he were but sometimes I wanna have him reel it back and realize that it takes more than a few sweet words to woo a lady or gain a friend for that matter. But then again it's too much fun drawing him as a little clefairy and I've gotten used to him as a clefairy.
GOSH It was never this hard to decide if you wanted to evolve your pokemon in the game!! hahahahaa also woops didn't mean to blarf all over you about this haha

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FairWeatherStorms In reply to CheesyCrocs [2011-10-25 01:27:12 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha no problem I love blurbs like this. In the games its more like "HECK YEAH STRONGER POKEMON WHOOOO" you don't have to worry about drawing them or their character. Unlike here where you have to think long and hard, so of course its harder to have that lil guy grow up! And you can always take your time with showing that growth no one says he has to turn into a clefable right away. I love how your able to show your characters personalitys so well in your missions something I struggle with.
I'm trying to use Zyox's evolution as a symbolism to show he's accepted his fate as a pokemon, but again I'm not sure how well it'll turn out....Whoops looks like I blarfed too here <:3c

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CheesyCrocs In reply to FairWeatherStorms [2011-10-25 03:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know I know, but it's kinda funny that at the base of it all I'm torn between wanting to draw him as a clefairy and wanting to draw him as a clefable haha. So silly~*~*~
Naw man blarfs are accepted always! They're fun to read haha. Well I hope you find a way to get it to work man. :V

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VicareLovelace [2011-10-24 23:54:58 +0000 UTC]

Jesus your lineartttttttttttttttttt. This looks great.

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CheesyCrocs In reply to VicareLovelace [2011-10-25 00:59:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks buddy. :V

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biscuitcrumbs [2011-10-24 23:21:20 +0000 UTC]

awesome stuff as always! and lovely crisp lines, you've got some nice weight in them too

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CheesyCrocs In reply to biscuitcrumbs [2011-10-25 00:52:46 +0000 UTC]

hah thanks man!

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BlueMijumaru [2011-10-24 22:49:17 +0000 UTC]

This looks so clean and crisp. :0
The backgrounds look awesome too.
I love how you drew Master Foo.

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CheesyCrocs In reply to BlueMijumaru [2011-10-24 23:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks! I had no idea how fun meinfoo were to draw till I started sketching out Master Foo. They're basically one of my favorite pokemon to draw now haha

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Srarlight [2011-10-24 22:43:02 +0000 UTC]

hahaha oh my gosh this page is so crisp and clean very nice. the back grounds lok great to!

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CheesyCrocs In reply to Srarlight [2011-10-24 23:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Thaaank you very much! c:

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Srarlight In reply to CheesyCrocs [2011-10-25 20:48:27 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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