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Vampiresmoke [2009-12-24 07:12:04 +0000 UTC]
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I saw this image as part of the calendar collage you created and had to come and find it. I don't know if that disqualifies me from giving a fair critique, apologies if it does, but I would like to anyway. I absolutely love this image.
Your character is stunningly beautiful. Her hair, eyes, and lip in my opinion go together perfectly, even view in this smaller version that shows on the critique page the details in her face are very well defined.
The nudity in the image is tastefully done well. As someone who appreciates the female form, you have emphasized that beauty by creating a pose that is natural. In other words the nudity is not overwhelming, it's simply beautiful.
The color of red in her costume goes extremely well with her hair color. I also feel the bow on her thong is a nice touch, it adds another sexy element to the image.
I also like the seasonal tattoo around her navel. It is a natural shade to make it believable rather than too dark as is often done in many renders.
The props in the scene are almost secondary, your character dominates the scene and someone might easily miss some of the detail there like the figures at the bottom of the panels and the picture on the rear wall. I appreciate that extra detail.
Now comes the difficult part. If I am able to offer anything constructive it would be that her skin is a little too perfect. Nevertheless that does not significant detract from the scene, but I think if you dialed up the natural skin tones a tad, you would have a image that looked dead on like a photograph.
This is spectacular work, very well done.
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chenoasart In reply to Vampiresmoke [2009-12-24 07:40:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so very much for your critique, I am glad you like it. Yes, I love adding little details to my scenes, most of which were done in post work, including the tattoo, bow, figures on the panels, etc. The character I was doing is Alandra, she is one of the main characters of my dear friend 's books The Servent to Lust series Her skin is perfect for a reason though, because she is an elemental vampire, so she wouldn't have bright fleshy skin tones or scars, etc. she is the Element of Lust which I have tried to play up with the bow, pose, and tasteful nudity Thank you so much for the critique, and you are by no means disqualified, anyone is welcome to critique my works
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scifiguy2000 [2011-02-10 20:11:58 +0000 UTC]
i love red and hot women
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Ferelwing [2009-12-11 06:42:46 +0000 UTC]
So very lovely Jess! I love her!
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coyotepam [2009-12-11 05:33:50 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. Hugs...Pam
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coyotepam In reply to chenoasart [2009-12-15 08:44:39 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome sweetie. Hugs...Pam
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Afina79 [2009-12-10 16:37:04 +0000 UTC]
A flawless beauty sure to entice any man this holiday season.
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Afina79 In reply to chenoasart [2009-12-12 12:20:31 +0000 UTC]
You are most welcome.
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