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CherryRedRoses — Always
Published: 2009-09-29 07:59:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1860; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 7
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Description The rain streaked down the windows as the car sped down the road. What was at the end of the road? She didn’t know. All she knew was that the memories that had haunted her were almost 3 miles away now. A chime went off in her bag and she reached in to grab her phone. She looked at the name flashing on the LED screen and, with a small ounce of regret, placed it back into her bag. Her eyes wandered back to the dismal world outside, at the grey ocean that lapped silently against the even greyer sand. Grey, miserable, dark; that was all the colours and shades her world consisted of these days. The car slowed to make way for a handful of foolish beach goers. There was only one person on the dark sands now. She stared at the lone shadow trying to see through the fogged glass of the car windows.
Male, tall, young and thin.
The young man turned to look over his shoulder but the rain misted his features.
No…
With trembling fingers she opened the car door and got out, ignoring her chaperones protests. The wind caught her hair making it sweep out behind her like one of the great storm clouds that had been on her horizon for many long weeks. He turned to face her fully, his eyes never leaving her own. With a gasp she leaped forward and dashed down onto the beach. Hope and shock beat in rhythm to her hearts frantic beats. Her feet sank deep into the sand but she pushed forwards falling time and time again. Each time she would grit her teeth, look at the man she had missed for so long and then pull herself free.
He’s still here……
Out of breath and blinded by tears she stopped before him. The rain cascaded down like a silk curtain around them, obscuring them from anyone’s view.  
“You never said Goodbye” he murmured, half reaching out his hand to her touch her pale face.
“You never gave me a chance” she sobbed back taking his hand in her own and lacing her fingers through his.  
He leaned forward and touched his forehead against hers.
“Just close you eyes” his voice was almost as distant as the wind. “Remember me always”
She closed her eyes and tried to memorise the feeling of his hand, his skin, his breath against her face. His smell, his eyes, his voice. There was nothing in her world but him.
The wind sighed and tugged at her clothing. She opened her eyes slowly, blinded by the sudden colours that had flooded her world. She clasped her now empty hands together and stared out at the glorious green sea. Her tears mixed with the rain as she stood alone.
“Always” she murmured into the air.
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Comments: 34

DarkenedHorse [2012-11-12 18:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful!

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nekoyasha2o11 [2010-06-30 01:35:49 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful. It is a wonderful story.
Along with a wonderful picture. You did a great job.

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CherryRedRoses In reply to nekoyasha2o11 [2010-06-30 21:03:00 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you liked it Thank you so much for taking the time to comment!!

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nekoyasha2o11 In reply to CherryRedRoses [2010-07-01 16:54:45 +0000 UTC]

=] Your welcome. It's a wonderful story.

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yoursushiness [2010-05-28 03:13:20 +0000 UTC]

I loved it, it's really a beautiful piece. Great job!

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CherryRedRoses In reply to yoursushiness [2010-05-31 09:42:06 +0000 UTC]

(^^) Thank you so much!

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yoursushiness In reply to CherryRedRoses [2010-06-01 13:07:27 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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queen-hobo [2010-04-21 09:10:43 +0000 UTC]

this is so good, so touching! and sad at the same time your a amazing writer!

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CherryRedRoses In reply to queen-hobo [2010-04-21 18:18:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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queen-hobo In reply to CherryRedRoses [2010-04-22 08:28:20 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure it was beautiful

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mypdl [2010-03-10 07:36:32 +0000 UTC]

aww! that story, this photo, is not just romantic, not just sad, not just lovely, not just wonderful, but it is Awesome!

i love your story... so much! can u make another one...

thnk you... 10 stars ***** *****

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CherryRedRoses In reply to mypdl [2010-03-10 10:25:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the lovely comment! Im really glad that you liked this story I based this on an image that inspired the story but I'd be happy to write you a short story if you'd note me the details?

Again, thank you

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MzLive [2010-03-05 23:06:25 +0000 UTC]

beautiful ;__;

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CherryRedRoses In reply to MzLive [2010-03-07 22:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Indian-Tribe [2010-02-22 19:26:32 +0000 UTC]

I love it!
It reminds me of Stephenie Meyer's writing! It might be because I'm not english, so I'm not as able as native people to differenciate the different writings...
But I like it a lot! I really think it sounds like her writing when her female characters are the narrator...

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CherryRedRoses In reply to Indian-Tribe [2010-02-22 22:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you so much!!! Your comment is lovely (^^)
I've been told I write like her on some of the writing sites I'm on lol so I think you differenciate fine hehe

Thank you for the fave and Deviantwatch aswell

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Indian-Tribe In reply to CherryRedRoses [2010-02-23 17:50:08 +0000 UTC]

You're really welcome!
Did you read her books? You might have been influenced!
Did you vote for me here:[link]

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zyde [2010-01-23 10:22:17 +0000 UTC]

i had to cry... you write so beautifully, i was really moved. great job!

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CherryRedRoses In reply to zyde [2010-01-24 04:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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WAN-Bill [2009-11-13 14:28:41 +0000 UTC]

This brings the reader into the story. By starting at the end (or is it?) you allowed us to add our own personal life experiences.

Nicely done!

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CherryRedRoses In reply to WAN-Bill [2009-11-15 09:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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xyberangel [2009-11-07 03:39:30 +0000 UTC]

wow such powerful writing, especially as it works its way towards the end, very emotional and touching.

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CherryRedRoses In reply to xyberangel [2009-11-08 05:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ellen-a [2009-10-28 11:16:38 +0000 UTC]

it hit me right here -> i love it

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CherryRedRoses In reply to ellen-a [2009-10-28 19:09:35 +0000 UTC]

I am glad that you enjoyed this piece. Thank you so much for your comment

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ellen-a In reply to CherryRedRoses [2009-10-29 06:33:14 +0000 UTC]

you deserve it

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sunshine-and-Jesus [2009-10-01 15:05:15 +0000 UTC]

so i just read this.
cuz i found the picture on a fave of a friend of a friend...

i totally cried.

that needs to be a book.

*im still crying*

T_T

its beautiful.

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CherryRedRoses In reply to sunshine-and-Jesus [2009-10-02 04:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Lol nice to know that the emotions can be sensed hehe
Thank you so much for commenting!!

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sunshine-and-Jesus In reply to CherryRedRoses [2009-10-03 15:59:10 +0000 UTC]

again, you are more than welcome!

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Laynasweetie [2009-10-01 10:44:10 +0000 UTC]

ur writing continues to amaze me hun... just amazing

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CherryRedRoses In reply to Laynasweetie [2009-10-01 10:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you hun!
I am glad you like it hehe
Love you!!

Thank you for being such a great support to me. I don't think my writing would have progressed much if it werent for you.

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Laynasweetie In reply to CherryRedRoses [2009-10-02 04:12:04 +0000 UTC]

awah! love u too gorgeous!
im glad i can be of service xD
x

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Jaicca [2009-09-29 21:29:56 +0000 UTC]

you've painted a beautiful image with your words, I can't express how attached I am to this piece. You managed to fill it with so much meaning and emotions, I just adore it <3

I was wondering if you mind me linking to it from the photograph?

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CherryRedRoses In reply to Jaicca [2009-09-30 00:58:24 +0000 UTC]

No I wouldn't mind at all!!!
I am so glad you like it

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