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Published: 2008-06-10 06:17:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 16348; Favourites: 202; Downloads: 0
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Description MOST FRUSTRATING PANEL WAS THE BOTTOM ONE. ahem.
Just so you know if you haven't read this page yet. I made a slight change to Jareth's face. His nose is a bit shorter now, his face a bit thinner and his cheek bone more present. I hope this small altercation will make him more "Jarethy"

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You would think that Jareth disapearing would be the toughest and the Labyrinth lines the hardest. But for this particular page they were both easy. Except for the coloring on the last panel. My computer kept freezing on me, and I kid you not, about 7 times before I finished. Making the production of this page four to five times longer than it should have. I'm going to bed now.
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Aracely [2010-01-07 04:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Aw, now she has to go through the labyrinth. What if she tries to fly over???

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Kakurosu [2009-09-04 16:13:04 +0000 UTC]

u got the idea with the king having to look cool, instead of realistic, great job!

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CheshFire In reply to Kakurosu [2009-09-04 18:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodie. ^^

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Kakurosu In reply to CheshFire [2009-09-05 17:57:31 +0000 UTC]

yup, really good, i dislike the idea with him bieng more than 10 years older than her, like in the movie...

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anime-gurl13 [2009-01-01 03:20:18 +0000 UTC]

Great, uh, i feel dumb for asking but what is this girl's name.

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CheshFire In reply to anime-gurl13 [2009-01-01 19:03:38 +0000 UTC]

I haven't told anyone her name yet for the plot's sake. Its not much to the addition to the plot, but it adds a bit of interest.

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anime-gurl13 In reply to CheshFire [2009-01-02 21:51:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, well I like her, to bad that she and Jareth don't get together...

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CheshFire In reply to anime-gurl13 [2009-01-03 08:25:34 +0000 UTC]

lol. No, there's to many Sarah/Jareth fans out there.

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anime-gurl13 In reply to CheshFire [2009-01-03 09:26:30 +0000 UTC]

aW!!! ok

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ladydragonbane [2008-12-04 04:03:02 +0000 UTC]

That disappearing act is so cool. Well done

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okapirose [2008-07-15 18:56:32 +0000 UTC]

Love the top panel

Liking this so far, keep up the awesome work ^^

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Shahrezad1 [2008-07-15 07:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful detail, and great expression. Also, the anatomy is really good and I like where you're taking the comic so far. =^__^=

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CheshFire In reply to Shahrezad1 [2008-07-15 16:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I've worked very hard on this. ^^

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Shahrezad1 In reply to CheshFire [2008-07-16 06:32:01 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. =^__^=

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Kit-Kat-Choco [2008-07-15 00:36:10 +0000 UTC]

This is just AMAZING I love it, especially Jareth's face at the top of this page I lvoe this comic so far, I can't wait for more ^^

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CheshFire In reply to Kit-Kat-Choco [2008-07-15 00:37:34 +0000 UTC]

It will be updated by next week. ^^ See you then.

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Kit-Kat-Choco In reply to CheshFire [2008-07-15 00:42:07 +0000 UTC]

Woooooow thanks so much

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CheshFire In reply to Kit-Kat-Choco [2008-07-15 00:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Welcome. ^^

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Fairy-Red-Hime [2008-07-14 13:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Wonder how this will go...

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soundofsouls13 [2008-07-12 05:57:59 +0000 UTC]

*_* I LIKE IT!!! >W< i lub your story so far! it is really good!! >_ OH can't wait for the next page !!


very well done!

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CheshFire In reply to soundofsouls13 [2008-07-14 02:56:44 +0000 UTC]

The next page will be up very soon. Now that I'm back from camping, all I have left on the next page is the text and about 10% left of the background. XD

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soundofsouls13 In reply to CheshFire [2008-07-30 17:26:28 +0000 UTC]

sweetness ^_^

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CheshFire In reply to soundofsouls13 [2008-07-30 17:28:01 +0000 UTC]

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CrazyMissDaisy [2008-06-28 22:12:26 +0000 UTC]

more!

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CheshFire In reply to CrazyMissDaisy [2008-06-28 22:20:52 +0000 UTC]

XD hopefully by monday!

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CrazyMissDaisy In reply to CheshFire [2008-06-28 22:24:13 +0000 UTC]

YAY! I love this (but hey imn a sucker for everything with Jareth hehe)

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CheshFire In reply to CrazyMissDaisy [2008-06-28 22:26:19 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel. But strangely I don't have a crush on him...

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CrazyMissDaisy In reply to CheshFire [2008-06-28 22:27:52 +0000 UTC]

My first crush ever was on Jareth Even my mom remember it tehee

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CheshFire In reply to CrazyMissDaisy [2008-06-28 22:55:49 +0000 UTC]

Darth Maul. Don't ask me why.

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CrazyMissDaisy In reply to CheshFire [2008-06-28 22:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Hey heΒ΄s a bad boy- who beat up JediΒ΄s! that rocks!

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CheshFire In reply to CrazyMissDaisy [2008-06-28 22:58:14 +0000 UTC]

his time in the Star Wars univers was cut short, they could have done so much more with him.

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Shizmozzle [2008-06-27 01:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he does look more 'Jarethy' ^^ This is interesting, I wish I found this at a time when you're done with the beginning so I won't have a cliffie like this >:3 Oh well, gogogo!

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CheshFire In reply to Shizmozzle [2008-06-27 05:18:05 +0000 UTC]

weeeeeeell, the end to this chapter is a cliff hanger anyway. Just to warn you. >.>

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Shizmozzle In reply to CheshFire [2008-07-01 08:49:37 +0000 UTC]

XD Oh well, as long as you don't stop there >:3

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CheshFire In reply to Shizmozzle [2008-07-01 19:04:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh, but of coarse not! jk.

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yodeladyhoo [2008-06-26 11:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Your use of color to deepen the depth of field and distance is fabulous. I'm not going to nickpick on Jareth's apearance (personally, I perfer him with the dialated pupil versus the heterochromia) but the work is great. I'm wondering on your spelling of your OC. Feary -vs- faery -vs- fairy. Care to give a little insight or would that be giving away too much.

Thanks for sharing

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CheshFire In reply to yodeladyhoo [2008-06-26 21:25:24 +0000 UTC]

As for the appearance of Jareth, I'm still learning how to draw his face. >.< its very difficult. As for the eyes, in the way I've been drawing him (besides the coverpage) he has one blue and one brown colored eye, as well as the left being dilated.


I've spelt "feary" because thats how alot of people on deviant spell it when referring to the species they think Jareth is. But I suppose some specificts are in order.

Tiny, biting, winged-ones that were shot down by Hoggle= Fairy. A close relative to Pixies but not nearly as mischievous.

and the much taller species of Jareth and my OC is= Feary. I consider Jareth to belong to the same kind of Feary that appear in Shakespear's "A Mid Summer Night's Dream."

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snowtool [2008-06-22 22:56:06 +0000 UTC]

saweet!

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otaku06 [2008-06-22 19:38:28 +0000 UTC]

I like it! good work! ^^

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CheshFire In reply to otaku06 [2008-06-22 19:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you.

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Darkrose283 [2008-06-14 05:23:51 +0000 UTC]

ARGH!!! The suspense is killing me! ....

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CheshFire In reply to Darkrose283 [2008-06-14 21:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Heh, sorry.

But I'm glad you're so interested.

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ProfSSnape [2008-06-12 21:42:20 +0000 UTC]

I love it! Keep it up this is a great comic series, I cant wait for more!

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CheshFire In reply to ProfSSnape [2008-06-12 22:40:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh, don't worry. I have every intention to keep going!

A slice of Jareth anyone? Here is your tea, would you like crystals to go with that?

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ProfSSnape In reply to CheshFire [2008-06-13 20:54:37 +0000 UTC]

oh yes please who could possibly resist such an offer?

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Rockomics [2008-06-12 14:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Very nice effects and fine storytelling!

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CheshFire In reply to Rockomics [2008-06-12 18:50:49 +0000 UTC]

I wanted this page to feel like a movie scene. ^^

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AylaElphabaMidna [2008-06-12 14:10:52 +0000 UTC]

I love the Jareth fading panel...I can hear his deep voice echoing, like in the movie.
"...before your baby brother becomes one of us, forever. Such a pity."

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CheshFire In reply to AylaElphabaMidna [2008-06-12 18:49:49 +0000 UTC]

"such a pity" Jareth is so English.

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AylaElphabaMidna In reply to CheshFire [2008-06-16 20:38:57 +0000 UTC]

lol, yes. so true. *sighs*

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