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MOST FRUSTRATING PANEL WAS THE BOTTOM ONE. ahem.
Just so you know if you haven't read this page yet. I made a slight change to Jareth's face. His nose is a bit shorter now, his face a bit thinner and his cheek bone more present. I hope this small altercation will make him more "Jarethy"NEXT:[link]
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You would think that Jareth disapearing would be the toughest and the Labyrinth lines the hardest. But for this particular page they were both easy. Except for the coloring on the last panel. My computer kept freezing on me, and I kid you not, about 7 times before I finished. Making the production of this page four to five times longer than it should have.
I'm going to bed now.
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Aw, now she has to go through the labyrinth. What if she tries to fly over???
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u got the idea with the king having to look cool, instead of realistic, great job!
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yup, really good, i dislike the idea with him bieng more than 10 years older than her, like in the movie...
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Great, uh, i feel dumb for asking but what is this girl's name.
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I haven't told anyone her name yet for the plot's sake. Its not much to the addition to the plot, but it adds a bit of interest.
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Oh, well I like her, to bad that she and Jareth don't get together...
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lol. No, there's to many Sarah/Jareth fans out there.
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That disappearing act is so cool. Well done
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Love the top panel
Liking this so far, keep up the awesome work ^^
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Beautiful detail, and great expression. Also, the anatomy is really good and I like where you're taking the comic so far. =^__^=
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Thank you. I've worked very hard on this. ^^
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You're welcome. =^__^=
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This is just AMAZING 
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It will be updated by next week. ^^ See you then.
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Woooooow thanks so much
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*_* I LIKE IT!!! >W< i lub your story so far! it is really good!! >_
very well done!
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The next page will be up very soon. Now that I'm back from camping, all I have left on the next page is the text and about 10% left of the background. XD
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XD hopefully by monday!
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YAY! I love this (but hey imn a sucker for everything with Jareth hehe)
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I know how you feel. But strangely I don't have a crush on him...
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My first crush ever was on Jareth 
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Hey heΒ΄s a bad boy- who beat up JediΒ΄s! that rocks!
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his time in the Star Wars univers was cut short, they could have done so much more with him.
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Yeah, he does look more 'Jarethy' ^^ This is interesting, I wish I found this at a time when you're done with the beginning so I won't have a cliffie like this >:3 Oh well, gogogo!
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XD Oh well, as long as you don't stop there >:3
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Oh, but of coarse not! 
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Your use of color to deepen the depth of field and distance is fabulous. I'm not going to nickpick on Jareth's apearance (personally, I perfer him with the dialated pupil versus the heterochromia) but the work is great. I'm wondering on your spelling of your OC. Feary -vs- faery -vs- fairy. Care to give a little insight or would that be giving away too much.
Thanks for sharing
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As for the appearance of Jareth, I'm still learning how to draw his face. >.< its very difficult. As for the eyes, in the way I've been drawing him (besides the coverpage) he has one blue and one brown colored eye, as well as the left being dilated.
I've spelt "feary" because thats how alot of people on deviant spell it when referring to the species they think Jareth is. But I suppose some specificts are in order.
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But I'm glad you're so interested.
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I love it! Keep it up this is a great comic series, I cant wait for more!
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Oh, don't worry. I have every intention to keep going!
A slice of Jareth anyone? Here is your tea, would you like crystals to go with that?
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oh yes please who could possibly resist such an offer?
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I wanted this page to feel like a movie scene. ^^
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I love the Jareth fading panel...I can hear his deep voice echoing, like in the movie.
"...before your baby brother becomes one of us, forever. Such a pity."
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