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Published: 2012-08-18 11:30:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1504; Favourites: 116; Downloads: 18
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Description "Let your dreams fly"

Vocaloid Hatsune Miku.

Feel free to Critique, it would help me a lot.
finally using this premium for something//sobs
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Vivceptable [2012-08-19 00:03:19 +0000 UTC]

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AMG EDDIIEE WHATS WRONG WITH YOu THIS IS BEAUTIFUL LOLOLOL SPAMS PSMA SPAM lieufliq But I agree with the top critique- her arms are a bit thin. BUT ITS TOO BEAUTIUFUL FOR ME To EVEN AMG
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CAN I BUY THIS OFF YOU AMAZING PERSON
//kisses a.deviantart.net/avatars/b/r/b… " alt=" " title="brokissplz" />
That ahiirr amg runs away to rfgirwg
LOLOLOL LOL LOL Oljfengr
this amazing arts ewfkehdagv
these beautiful. colours. are . to awesome for my eyes to even comprehend their majesty and AMG yeah. poop. poopp. poop.
//casually fills up word count e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
Yeah. What the other critique said- because that critiqe was beautiful. yea. yea, dfgs

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chewbeary In reply to Vivceptable [2012-08-19 00:07:08 +0000 UTC]


Viv...this isn't even a critique--

//ratesyourcritiqueasunfairhah

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Vivceptable In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-19 00:26:29 +0000 UTC]

HAH HAH HAH HAH HAH

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FallenFromEmptiness In reply to Vivceptable [2012-08-19 07:50:03 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha you people ;D

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xlolfishx [2012-08-18 12:44:06 +0000 UTC]

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Over all this picture is quite nice. There are a few anatomy issues here and there, the feet look too flat, there isn't a very distinctive arch in the foot. Her face is a bit too low on her face, her arms are a tad thin and her hands a little small, but you'll improve on all these things in time.

I really like your shading technique. The hair looks lively and silky, something I find hard to do. However, towards the end of the pigtail on the left it looks a little odd when it becomes very thin. Also on the shading, you might want to use more levels, make the darks darker so there is a larger contrast, this can give the image more depth.

The compostion of the piece is very nice and the colour scheme works well. Well done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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chewbeary In reply to xlolfishx [2012-08-18 13:08:57 +0000 UTC]

First of all, thanks for taking the time to critique my drawing. The funny thing is that I made the hand smaller because I thought that it was too big-
Ah- I can see the mistakes after I stare at it for a while.
Thanks for the advice!

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xlolfishx In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-18 13:11:29 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome Hand are awfully deceptive like that, I often draw them too small myself. Also, I just noticed a typo in my critique, "Her face is a bit too low on her face" is meant to be " Her face is a bit too low on her head" oops xD

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taruhead [2012-10-03 12:34:59 +0000 UTC]

SHRIEKS WHEN I WENT ON YOUR PAGE AND I SAW THIS I ALMOST CRIED BECAUSE WOW MAN WOW WOW WHAT IS THIS YOU KNOW ITS NOT ALMOST CRY BECAUSE I THINK I AM GOING TO ACTUALLY CRY RIGHT HERE IDK THERE;S JUST SUCH AN OVERWHELMINGLY SAD, BUT AT THE SAME TIME HAPPY AND PEACEFUL FEEL COMING OFF THIS
NOT TO MENTION YOU PULLED IT OFF SO BEAUTIFULLY AND THE BLUE LINES WORK SO WELL
and the paper planes with the clouds- the water colour ish effect wow i am in love here yes i am
I honestly want to stare at this forever.

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chewbeary In reply to taruhead [2012-10-03 12:45:22 +0000 UTC]

ERFWEJFHE OMG CHIBI PLS
UR OVER REACTING SOBSARIVER
THE ANATOMY IS ALL OFF
OMG CHIBI PLS
SOBBU
D

DONT STARE AT IT TOO LONG OR UR EYES WILL BURN-

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taruhead In reply to chewbeary [2012-10-03 12:59:12 +0000 UTC]

NOT OVERREACTING
I GOT TEARS IN MY EYES BECAUSE THE ATMOSPHERE FROM THIS IDK AND EXPRESSION AND PLANES AND CLOUDS AND AND AND EVERYTHING
;;___;; EDDIE YOU AMAZING PRECIOUS GOD THAT IS HOW BEAUTIFUL YOUR ART IS
HOW DO YOU MAKE SUCH SPARKLING BUT NOT SHOWY SPARKLING, MORE LIKE A SUBTLE GENTLE MORE PRECIOUS SPARKLING CREATIONS

I- I CAN'T //CRY

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chewbeary In reply to taruhead [2012-10-03 13:04:55 +0000 UTC]

EFHEGWFWEFWE FWEHFUWEF
SOBBU SOBBU
CHIBI PLS
I-I WING EVERYTHING

D-DONT CRY
//SLAPS TISSUES ON UR PRECIOUS FAISU

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IceLaws [2012-09-01 02:32:09 +0000 UTC]


this looks awesome ;-; <333333333333333

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chewbeary In reply to IceLaws [2012-09-01 02:45:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks sis-

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IceLaws In reply to chewbeary [2012-09-01 02:55:16 +0000 UTC]

ilyyyy
<3
;-;

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MoonSpirit17 [2012-08-19 04:38:21 +0000 UTC]

...woah, so nice...

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chewbeary In reply to MoonSpirit17 [2012-08-19 04:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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ceruleancases [2012-08-19 01:05:43 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFF--

WRY CAN'T I DO THIS

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chewbeary In reply to ceruleancases [2012-08-19 01:08:43 +0000 UTC]

JEWFHWEF
YEAH
YOU CAN DO BETTERR
WEJHFUWF

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PrinceMintt [2012-08-19 00:05:58 +0000 UTC]

It's so freakin amazing

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chewbeary In reply to PrinceMintt [2012-08-19 00:08:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I worked hard on this.

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PrinceMintt In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-19 00:10:30 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome, and I can tell ^^

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Hama-S [2012-08-18 23:40:41 +0000 UTC]

how do you colour rolls all over this

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chewbeary In reply to Hama-S [2012-08-18 23:50:06 +0000 UTC]

how do you draw, colour and everything
rolls all over you

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B4NG [2012-08-18 21:14:17 +0000 UTC]

My only problem, SAVE IT AS A PNG!
<3333333

Trust me it will look better as PNG!
TTvTT

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chewbeary In reply to B4NG [2012-08-18 23:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Whats the difference.

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B4NG In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-18 23:51:47 +0000 UTC]

Png is actually a more high quality picture I guess. uvu

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chewbeary In reply to B4NG [2012-08-18 23:58:51 +0000 UTC]

oh..okay..
//edits file

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xBlueStaar [2012-08-18 11:35:25 +0000 UTC]

AMG EDDIEEEEEE THE CANVAS IS SO BIG
HOMG MIKU IS SO PRETTYYYYY KYAAAAAH
EDDIE
YOUR PHOTOSHOP SKILLS ARE SO PRO
OMG
WHY
ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME
LEAVING ME AGAIN--

HOW DO YOU DRAW ON SUCH LARGE CANVASES ?
TEACH ME SENSEIIIIII!!!

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chewbeary In reply to xBlueStaar [2012-08-18 11:40:37 +0000 UTC]

lols. Because I realised all my canvases were all like 1000 and 1500 so I wanted to spice things up at make it way bigger.


No your leaving me behind.
omg I barely remember what I did.

wjefhuwfwe
LOTS OF BREAKS AND ANIME.//SOBS
I DON'T KNOW ASK KEL!

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xBlueStaar In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-18 12:04:04 +0000 UTC]

omg but still
you proooo
im not leaving you behind, you are

//sobs
Eddieee how do you not go on DA ?
I need to concentrate on my school stuff b-but DA is too addictive

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chewbeary In reply to xBlueStaar [2012-08-18 12:16:39 +0000 UTC]

no. I'm on Da.
ahahahaa
my hiatus is basically stopping myself from rushed drawing rp art.
yeah. lols.

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xBlueStaar In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-19 05:59:11 +0000 UTC]

oh okay.
but still how do you manage all your assignments and exams? ; v ;

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chewbeary In reply to xBlueStaar [2012-08-19 06:01:22 +0000 UTC]


what assignments and ex---
//shot

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xBlueStaar In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-19 06:08:21 +0000 UTC]

YOU MEAN YOU DONT STUDY?

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chewbeary In reply to xBlueStaar [2012-08-19 06:19:42 +0000 UTC]

yes

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xBlueStaar In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-19 06:29:42 +0000 UTC]

ughhhh you genius kid

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chewbeary In reply to xBlueStaar [2012-08-19 07:03:32 +0000 UTC]

no-
I get really average marks-
or below average ahahaaa
im not a top student-

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xBlueStaar In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-19 09:08:55 +0000 UTC]

if you're at my school you'll be at the top

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chewbeary In reply to xBlueStaar [2012-08-19 09:41:46 +0000 UTC]

pshh
im always on the bottom

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xBlueStaar In reply to chewbeary [2012-08-19 10:01:18 +0000 UTC]

liesss all liesss

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Kelcake [2012-08-18 11:34:20 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
YOU COULD TOTALLY SELL IT AS A PRINT

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chewbeary In reply to Kelcake [2012-08-18 11:41:23 +0000 UTC]

YOU THINK?
OMG-
I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW PEOPLE MAKE THEIR ARTWORKS INTO PRINTS LIKE SEND IT TO A PRINTING COMPANY OR SOMETHING.
//SOBS
thank you kel.

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