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chewtoy25 — Alone...
Published: 2009-04-25 14:59:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 65; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Away from you,
      I feel so empty, and
      I feel alone.
While I'm here,
      You long for me, and
      You feel alone.
While we're apart,
      Our tie still remains, and
      We feel each other's pain.
Oh, what a lonely time...
It is a dimension of solitude...
Even when friends and family
Crowd us, we feel separate...
While we're apart,
      We can't live, and
      We can't die.
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Comments: 4

chewtoy25 [2009-09-13 19:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Pff, yeah, "emotionally trying"...

Bullcrap...

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Arcticwolfhowler [2009-05-05 01:43:44 +0000 UTC]

I love it! I love the flow and pretty much everything about it. The emotion in this poem is very familiar to me, for sure.

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chewtoy25 In reply to Arcticwolfhowler [2009-05-05 01:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I felt pretty crappy when I thought it up and posted it; I hadn't seen my girlfriend in the longest time. That was an emotionally trying day for me.

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chewtoy25 In reply to chewtoy25 [2009-05-05 01:53:20 +0000 UTC]

If you liked that one, check out its sequel (sort-of): "Not Alone Anymore"

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