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ChibiAngel37 — If Only You Could Know
Published: 2008-12-21 09:12:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description If I were an girl,
I think I could understand,
How it feels to be the one left on a one night stand,

But they never think of us,
Of how much our heart hurts,
Walking down this lane,
With a beer in our hand,
Drinking of our loss,
Never crying about how it hurts,

Once you know that you lost an game,
You can’t go back and complain,
Or else you’ll be just an boy,
Not society’s ideal man,

Where he stands tall,
Independent and strong,
Capable of handling loss and responsibility,
Without shedding an tear,
Even if you lose someone dear,

But all they know,
From what I can tell,
All it takes for an girl,
Is to reach out for an telephone,
Say that she needs someone,

But for a guy its unheard for ,
To say what you need to,
Without shedding an tear,
Because that’s what little boys would do,
Not what an man would do,
Cause that’s how you were raised to be,
Strong and unbreakable,
Even if you are feeling emotional,

Be someone who laughs,
Never tell you how he feels,
Deep inside when its lonesome and bland,
And you know what you need to say,
But your heart won’t let you complain,
Because that’s how men in society are said to be,
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Comments: 12

ShaD-23 [2013-01-14 13:56:10 +0000 UTC]

They say crying is a sign of weakness. Since my birth, I've known it to be a sign that you're alive.

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to ShaD-23 [2013-02-18 08:43:36 +0000 UTC]

That's good, as long as you don't make sadness the reason for life. If it is, I hope you find something you're passionate about and that makes you happy because I believe that's what life should be ^^

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Psychopomp13 [2008-12-23 02:10:37 +0000 UTC]

Society's restraints are constantly pressing against people's wants and needs. It really sucks when you're trying to break through what everyone thinks you should be to get what you need, be you a male or not.

But I do think that guys have a particularly hard time with ideals of masculinity. Our society has such a strong image of what a man "should" be that when you break away from that "ideal" you're bound to get a hard time from other people.

Anyway, enough of my ranting. I like this poem. It's very thoughtful and it really hits home for me. You did a good job.

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to Psychopomp13 [2008-12-23 05:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know and yeah it does really suck. Yeah that's true, and yeah, I know. I feel very sorry for guys a lot sometimes. Thanks

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key6009 [2008-12-21 10:36:53 +0000 UTC]

ooo, i like it
good job!

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to key6009 [2008-12-23 05:19:16 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you
You should upload more of your pictures more often

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key6009 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2008-12-28 06:45:50 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!
lol, i'll try upload more often
just need the right pictures

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to key6009 [2008-12-28 21:10:29 +0000 UTC]

lol. you should, and oh what kind of photographs do you like to take?

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key6009 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2009-01-04 04:41:13 +0000 UTC]

hmm, i like taking random pictures
just nit picky on which ones should be on deviantart with everyones great art ^^"

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to key6009 [2009-01-04 07:27:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see.lol,that's kind of like me. lol. Except, I think you have better taste than me.

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PhantomThiefVier [2008-12-21 09:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Everyone has to cry sometime. Yet at the same time we all wrap ourselves up tightly in a mask that hides our feelings. *shakes head* We're all crazy. ^^

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to PhantomThiefVier [2008-12-23 05:27:14 +0000 UTC]

That's true and yeah I know. lol.

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