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Published: 2009-02-15 11:32:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description You tore a part of me ,
The one that cared all the time,

You disarranged every thought,
Until everything became an obscure frenzy,

I tried to play SOS,
But no one heard me cry,
Every night I would pray,
That my memory will go away,

You tore my heart aesthetically,
Never leaving any sympathy,
All you ever bought was my sanity,
Until nothing was left of me,

I tried to attach the holes,
Of all my memories,
To find the symphony inside,
But no one hears the screams outside,
My voice and notes are just a murmur and noise,
Of the soundtrack of my life,
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Comments: 16

suiren520 [2009-02-16 07:33:44 +0000 UTC]

...did sato tell you that? B\

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to suiren520 [2009-02-17 07:49:36 +0000 UTC]

No, my old English teacher did, but its good that she did.

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suiren520 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2009-02-18 05:03:28 +0000 UTC]

hn, I don't buy it -.-
but no worries. what's done is done, right?

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to suiren520 [2009-02-18 08:14:32 +0000 UTC]

what? why? she's really nice, seriously. Oh yeah I know, and anyway, its too dark to enter an local contest.

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suiren520 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2009-02-18 08:51:40 +0000 UTC]

ohhh...haha, I had the same problem w/ my Bushido/Way of the Samurai poem XP

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to suiren520 [2009-02-21 04:23:09 +0000 UTC]

really? can I read your poem if you have time?

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suiren520 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2009-02-21 07:23:18 +0000 UTC]

sure. It's already up here ^^

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to suiren520 [2009-02-22 07:49:49 +0000 UTC]

really? which one?

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suiren520 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2009-02-22 08:19:02 +0000 UTC]

umm...I think "The Way of the Samurai"...
it's in "Poems"

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to suiren520 [2009-02-22 08:27:56 +0000 UTC]

oh.lol. I see it now

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suiren520 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2009-02-22 09:09:15 +0000 UTC]

haha, and thanks for the fav ^^

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to suiren520 [2009-02-25 08:41:33 +0000 UTC]

lol your welcome

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LoneWolf808 [2009-02-15 19:09:14 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is deep, really deep.

If i heard someone singing this song, i would give them a big hug and ask if there ok..... because this is a truly DEEP insight in to a person's feelings.....

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to LoneWolf808 [2009-02-17 07:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Really? Thanks

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LoneWolf808 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2009-02-17 07:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Your Wiriting is something to behold, i'll watching for more!

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to LoneWolf808 [2009-02-18 04:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you
I like your writing as well , keep up with all the good work.

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