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ChibiAngel37 — Sometimes Isn't Enough
Published: 2010-07-06 05:23:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 279; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Sometimes being me and you isn't good enough,
You never see the effort I place every day,
All for you;
I know that empathy and faith is an issue,
But, all I want is the equal care and attention back,
That seems like time can never fix
Even in our many feuds.

Sometimes it isn't enough to be me,
I try to be the sister you love and care;
It never works out for me,
You scream and shout,
"That's not my name",
And I'm tired with it.

Sometimes it isn't enough to wake up,
Wake up and see this repetitive life:
Death every three to four months,
Lungs feeling stinted monthly,
Feeling isolated daily by them,
And then, feeling like this
Again and again;
Not like how others know me.
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Comments: 12

hitsuhen200 [2010-07-11 08:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I love the raw emotion. Your word choice is descriptive and vivid.

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to hitsuhen200 [2010-07-13 02:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Really? Thank you I love your poetry more though, for its original content

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hitsuhen200 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2010-07-18 06:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Thing that's wrong with originality is that I don't know how people will react to it. My poetry is really raw, so refinement is a huge issue for me.

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to hitsuhen200 [2010-07-21 02:28:13 +0000 UTC]

I see, and it's pretty good though. That's the beauty of poetry, its raw and it should be original.

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hitsuhen200 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2010-07-28 05:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I wish you could say that to the poetry critics.

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to hitsuhen200 [2010-07-29 00:46:32 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

I will, when you make it big.lol.

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hitsuhen200 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2010-07-30 04:37:18 +0000 UTC]

xD lol. We'll see.

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to hitsuhen200 [2010-08-06 23:43:13 +0000 UTC]

Yup.lol.

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LoneWolf808 [2010-07-06 21:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a really bad day

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to LoneWolf808 [2010-07-13 02:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Yup, so how are you?

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LoneWolf808 In reply to ChibiAngel37 [2010-07-13 06:19:02 +0000 UTC]

good, you?

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ChibiAngel37 In reply to LoneWolf808 [2010-07-13 23:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Okay, do you think you can go to Nerf tomorrow?

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