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ChibiAngel37 — Who Will Be My Guardian Angel?
Published: 2009-01-19 09:01:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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My voice is numb,As the music overlays the sound,
The silent screams I drew in my heart,
That eloquent face, my reflection,
Never heard of recieving,
Living without doubt,
When fear and sorrow lies,
Buried, but still above my soul,
You can tell me you'll care,
But who will be there?
To hold me when I fall,
When you expect perfection,
Not teardrops on my heart,
Who will be my guardian angel?
The one to lift me from my sorrow,
To show me to the light,
To open up my eyes to the beauty inside,
A picture I shunned all the time,
Who will be there by my side?
When you think its better to cry,
Because you never stop to think,
How I'm tired of this,
Eating fish, grains, and fruits,
While wondering why I cry,
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Comments: 24
ur welcome...
I love looking at your poetry...
blows mine out of the water...
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Really? Not, I'm pretty sure it doesn't and you're just being too polite.
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I don't think I've been able to come up with anything good in a while...
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Oh, maybe you're just exhuastated or super stressed out.
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i think that it's the latter reason...
I'm trying to unstress myself, but it doesn't seem to be working...
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Oh I see, and how many activities plus extra curricular and classes are you in?
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I think that it's the AP class that kills...
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Oh I see, well, try and hold on a little bit longer because I know you'll make it through.
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I guess everyone's looking for that someone, huh? I think you're getting a lot better at writing poetry; for some reason these newer ones stick out to me more.
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Yeah, I guess so.lol. Really? I kind of thought I was losing my touch with poetry honestly.
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Well I don't think you're losing it. Your poetry definitely has a different vibe, but I don't think it's worse. Maybe your touch is just changing.
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Really? I think it is.lol. At first, I thought it was getting [link] , I'm relieved I guess..so I know this is random, but what are you better at, drawing or writting?
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Well, I can write poetry a lot faster than I can draw, and people seem to like my poems more than my sketches. But when I take my time on a sketch and actually use references they can turn out fairly good.
I don't know, it's pretty complicated for me. I guess what I mean to say is that I can write poems more easily, but when I take my time sketches can turn out really good. What about you?
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That's kind of like me, and that's kind of why I asked you that. When I first browsed your profile I noticed that you had the same artistic abilities and skills like me except I think your still is more refined than mines.
It's complicated for me too. I have people tell me I'm better at drawing and another at writing, then I'm trying to figure out what area in the Fine Arts field I should major in..I can write poetry more easier than drawing, but I find the designing process in drawing more concise than in writting.
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Heh, thanks for that. But I don't know if I'm really more refined than you are.
And yeah, I'm having trouble sorting out college stuff too. But you still have time to figure it out, right? Just experiment with it until you can figure something out. And I think it comes down to which one you enjoy more rather than which one you're "better" at.
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lol. your welcome. I think you are, your poetry especially has this kind of quirky yet sophisticated style to it.
Really? Oh I see, and yeah I know..but its difficult. I know that I love both of them,and in this economy I'm worried I won't sustain myself if I chose one like drawing for instance fiancially..I hate college XD
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It's interesting that you describe my poetry like that, because that's often how I describe myself.
Heh, yeah it really sucks we can't just do what we enjoy in life. Stupid economy XD
Oh well, you can still do one as a main job and another a second job. That's kind of what I'm hoping I can do, actually. That way I don't really have to give anything up.
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Really?lol. That's funny, one day I want to meet you if I didn't meet you yet.
Yeah I know.lol. That's good and a good idea..Just don't know if I can do it..
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i am gonna make something on this !! 
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yeah its yet again ... a thing which i can relate to !!
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