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ChibiEdo In reply to White-Wing-Alchemist [2010-11-13 09:47:57 +0000 UTC]
yes.. poor alp ;_; did you continue reading after that..?XD
oh and did you take a look at the original fanfic (totally not by me)? because it's incredible..just start reading and you can't stop..XD
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AsjJohnson [2008-07-14 16:21:22 +0000 UTC]
I like panel two and the last panel a lot. ^_^ Panel two really jumped out to me... I think I was drawn to that one when I first saw the page, before I read anything. He looks 3-Dish, and I can't figure out exactly why... (ponders) Maybe the camera's slightly below eye level...
Anyhow, besides Alp, I like Ed's expression in the last panel. He's like O_O I lost my best friend in the whole world!
(glances at page again) I kind of like how the grenade seems to be going in slow motion... although, in a way it bugs me. (wonders if it would be better as one panel, with lots of grenades to signal movement) I do really like the close up of Alp turning his head and not seeming to comprehend what's going on, though.
...wait... Isn't... Alp and Auric a team here...? (can't recall how in the world Auric got out of death) I do remember something about Alp tying in with Al, though... I think Al lost his body when Alp appeared, but I don't recall if Al gets his body back when Alp dies or not...
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ChibiEdo In reply to AsjJohnson [2008-07-15 19:40:15 +0000 UTC]
aww glad you like that page ^^ I really like how that page turned out^^ love the last panel most
I drew the grenade like that cause this is what is in the text:
βAuric,β Alp opened his mouth to argue again. And then the unthinkable happened. An enemy shell came whistling through the air in seeming slow motion. Alp turned, eyes widening in shock. Auric reached desperately for his partner, as if to drag him through the Gate by sheer force of will.
well and on the last part.. there is not much you get to know about the connection between alp and al .. this here is the ONLY part where you get to know something about it at all:
βHow much longer had Alp been a Gatekeeper?β Maes was doodling on his notepad.
βOhβ¦umβ¦maybe four years?β Auric was starting to feel dizzy. Roy and Maes exchanged significant looks.
βThat would have been eight years ago. Coinciding withβ¦.β
Al was already following Maesβs line of reasoning. βWhen I lost my body. I diedβ¦or at least, I would have if Brother hadnβt sacrificed his right arm to bind me to that armor with the blood seal.β He frowned. βSo thereβs definitely some kind of connection between Auricβs ability to manipulate Gates and the Gate of Truth. But what?β
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AsjJohnson In reply to ChibiEdo [2008-07-15 21:42:22 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... Did they ever find out the connection between the portals and the Gate?
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ChibiEdo In reply to AsjJohnson [2008-07-18 21:28:36 +0000 UTC]
no not that I can remember..
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KillMePleaseGod [2008-04-04 14:40:07 +0000 UTC]
Aw, man, I didn't realize I had nearly none of the pages faved. >_> *goes through and favs them all*
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KillMePleaseGod In reply to ChibiEdo [2008-04-05 07:34:19 +0000 UTC]
I couldn't help myself. I just kept going and going and going... I'm the favoriting Energizer Bunny. XD
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sakura2133 [2008-04-04 02:00:28 +0000 UTC]
i am soo sorry, but this page makes me laugh. cuz of the KABOOM! it has no shading, so it's like he went poof! lol i LOVE ur art. i can't wait to read more of FC!
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ChibiEdo In reply to sakura2133 [2008-04-04 14:05:59 +0000 UTC]
XD I just can't draw explosions.. for later parts of my own doujin I have to learn though.. XD but not for this scribble thing which I draw just for fun..XD
I am very happy you like my art -^______^- I always appreciate that^^
did you read the FC fanfic ? cause it's more than awesome^^
maybe I'll draw another page today if I feel like it..XD
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sakura2133 In reply to ChibiEdo [2008-04-13 14:56:53 +0000 UTC]
I'm not done FC yet, i've been SOOO busy, and i can't remember what chapter i stopped at -.-' lol
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ChibiEdo In reply to sakura2133 [2008-04-13 21:54:18 +0000 UTC]
XDD well you have to look yourself where you were.. I really would recommend to finish though cause I love the end -^_^-
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Ginger-Curls [2008-04-01 22:02:18 +0000 UTC]
What's the little flying thing?
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ChibiEdo In reply to Ginger-Curls [2008-04-01 22:07:10 +0000 UTC]
it's supposed to be a grenade.. I also said so in my comment to the page ^_^;
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Ginger-Curls In reply to ChibiEdo [2008-04-01 22:09:28 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh.... I don't remember that part...
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ChibiEdo In reply to Ginger-Curls [2008-04-01 22:13:07 +0000 UTC]
you forgot that alp died by a grenade ? well it is in the first chapter from 36 so it's easy to forget stuff like that XD
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Ginger-Curls In reply to ChibiEdo [2008-04-03 01:10:18 +0000 UTC]
I thought it just... spontaneously combusted or something... or was it the whiplash?
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ChibiEdo In reply to Ginger-Curls [2008-04-03 12:59:46 +0000 UTC]
the whiplash happened after alp died cause whiplashes happen when something happens to one of the gatekeepers . and if you reread the beginning you can see that 'a grenade came whistling to the air' or something like that^^
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Ginger-Curls In reply to ChibiEdo [2008-04-03 22:13:27 +0000 UTC]
Oooooooohhh... I forgot that...
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edxwin [2008-04-01 01:43:22 +0000 UTC]
DX *cries in corner of woe* How i wish that part had not happened! You drew it so welll though. Nice job. Auric sad/shocked face D8
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ChibiEdo In reply to edxwin [2008-04-01 17:01:19 +0000 UTC]
yes poor alp ;_______________;
wouldn't it have been fun if alp would have come to amestris as well somehow^_^-
glad you like^^
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ChibiEdo In reply to edxwin [2008-04-01 22:05:23 +0000 UTC]
ROFL
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ChibiEdo In reply to Hikaru9 [2008-03-29 06:36:19 +0000 UTC]
aw glad you like it so far ^^
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Navarag [2008-03-28 18:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Have been sort of reading this comic so far...I LIKE IT SO FAR!
But this is saaaaaaad!
Alp looks like Alphonse, to me. O_o Is he??
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ChibiEdo In reply to Navarag [2008-03-29 17:27:33 +0000 UTC]
huh I wonder what went through my head when I wrote this:
"well actually alp has some connection to the alphonse who died and lost his body but you never know for sure what exactly."
... I didn't mean alphonse who died.. I just meant that it seems like alp existed since al has lost his body (cause you get to know that it was 8 years ago that al lost his body and alp was a gatekeeper for 8 years. ) that's pretty much all you get to know about him..
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ChibiEdo In reply to Navarag [2008-03-29 06:36:07 +0000 UTC]
thank you ^^ happy you like so far^^
yes I know it's sad.. there will be even more sad things that happen (there are some scenes where I almost felt like crying... and it wasn't this scene here XD )
well actually alp has some connection to the alphonse who died and lost his body but you never know for sure what exactly.. I don't know.. alphonse in amestris has his body restored now though (that's why ed landed in this different world in the first place.. everyone thinks he is dead. )
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ChibiEdo In reply to madtrash137 [2008-03-28 12:50:14 +0000 UTC]
aww cool -^___^- glad you like ^^
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Bubblegum01 [2008-03-27 21:48:20 +0000 UTC]
Ohnoes! >.< *wants to see next one*
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elementofrandominity [2008-03-27 21:03:33 +0000 UTC]
woo! lots of updates today!
this page is so sad >.<
you really do seem to have a problem with ed/auric's happiness. you love to see him in pain. o.O
oh wells ^^
awesome as always! cant wait for the rest. especially when you get to chapter 4! xD
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ChibiEdo In reply to elementofrandominity [2008-03-28 12:49:33 +0000 UTC]
yes ^^ *dances*
yes it is.. poor alp ;_; and auric.. haha well I love to see him in pain but I also like it if he is happy with roy -^______________^-
chapter 4 ? don't you mean chapter 5/6 ? cause there roy and auric will meet ^^ in chapter 4 is the valentine's day stuff though.. that's also a bittersweet scene which almost makes me cry..
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ChibiEdo In reply to elementofrandominity [2008-03-29 16:45:55 +0000 UTC]
yes poor roy ;_; I feel so sad for him ... but you can always think of the end when roy is finally happy -^___^-
I am not sure if he would be happy if you would hug him XDDD
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MymyArtzone [2008-03-27 19:01:02 +0000 UTC]
OMG, Alp O_O
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animecica4 [2008-03-27 18:39:36 +0000 UTC]
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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ChibiEdo In reply to animecica4 [2008-03-27 21:53:58 +0000 UTC]
interesting commentXD
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Rexanele [2008-03-27 16:20:36 +0000 UTC]
oh my god...I wasn't expecting that...MAKE THE NEXT ONE, QUICK!!
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ChibiEdo In reply to Rexanele [2008-03-27 21:52:59 +0000 UTC]
hihi XD don't know when I'll draw the next one.. maybe soon maybe not XD
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Rexanele In reply to ChibiEdo [2008-03-30 01:33:04 +0000 UTC]
*crosses fingers* soon, please, soon!
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ChibiEdo In reply to Rexanele [2008-04-01 17:14:02 +0000 UTC]
it's up^^
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