LoveMeSomeATLA [2012-08-03 11:45:52 +0000 UTC]
This is sweet. I mean, I always love emotional scenes mixed with luvin'. "Crying uncontrollably" is my favorite emotion. This is short but well paced, and the beginning is great (whispering her REAL name that no one else uses).
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ChickenSushi13 In reply to LoveMeSomeATLA [2012-08-04 05:35:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your feedback!
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