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Published: 2010-06-21 04:05:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 427; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 9
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I decided I wanted to try this:[link]Imma try to go in order even though I really wanna do some of them already. D: Hopefully my drawing will improve by the time I finish. :3
This one was mega rushed because it wasn't very fun D:<
It's suppose to be a littleish girl~
what do you guys see that I need to work on?
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besides the unnatural turn of her right leg, i think she looks great! i have a lot of problems drawing hands and angle of the feet too. her hair and outfit look great and she looks like someone you would call "sweetie" when you see her, lol! love the headband!
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Thank you!
Psh your feet and hands look beautiful in your pictures. D:< I envy that.
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thank u, that's nice of you! you're doing great though! you're welcome!
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Very cute
Good luck on the challenge 
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I've already started the sketch of my second one and it has a background! 
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tis very cute! your lines are still a bit shakey the legs looks like it is just hanging there! the berrys are so cute and the outfit is cute to!
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Thank you! Yerp the shaky lines still taunt me 
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aww beautiful, I'd say work on 3D depth example: the leg that's turned in is very flat looking. The picture looks great still though!
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aww beautiful, I'd say work on 3D depth example: the leg that's turned in is very flat looking. The picture looks great still though!
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Thank you very much~ I will work on that!
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I'm bored.. so I hope ya' don't mind my critiquing ^_^ <3
Head looks good~ Just watch the jawline (where it disappears behind the hair; it looks like it keeps going, but that's where it hsould curve up to meet the ear (this is an issue I always have
Love that you can tell she's leaning forward a bit and head down~ (where shoulders/neck meet that's one that a LOT of people have trouble with)
Forward facing leg looks pretty good (maybe a little on the thin side but that's up to you to decide x) I think it looks pretty good) side facing leg: try doing the pose in front of a mirror where you can see yourself (I do this all the time and my family looks at me likeI'm crazy, but it actually helps xD <3 ) her leg probly shouldn't litterally look like you're looking at a profiled picture, but more curved, usually with legs you can do crazy stuff to make it look like it should(-ish?) in any case, the foot -really- plays a big part in making the leg look natural this is where looking at your own or looking up images for reference (Google images, or ask/bing/whatever Images xD ) to see how the foot should look at whatever angle you wanna draw
(ohjeeze.. I got long winded .__.;; sorry xD <3 hope this is helpful! :3 )
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And thank you very much for the advice. I probably should have looked at some feet stock. x] I really appreciate that you spent all that time typing that thing up! :3 And it sounded so nice. Usually critique makes me sorta sad but yours didn't.
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Yay! .w.! Good~ I'm glad ^-^
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