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2000a1 [2020-08-25 12:22:34 +0000 UTC]
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2000a1 In reply to 2000a1 [2020-08-25 20:23:30 +0000 UTC]
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AlanPegler [2018-04-14 21:55:45 +0000 UTC]
I love your touch of emotion in here. PokΓ©mon has some very emotional moments. Very good solid and down to earth storyline too. I β€ it very much.
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AlanPegler In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2018-04-14 21:59:03 +0000 UTC]
The part where Serena and Murkrow were seeing the Northern Lights near the Snow Queen's territory was my personal favorite.
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Crazyhairedgurl [2015-11-17 06:05:16 +0000 UTC]
Awwwww Dem Feels! *Clap*
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EverythingReviewer In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2015-06-12 22:54:16 +0000 UTC]
I like the original Snow Queen story, and I feel like there are plenty of other people who don't know about Frozen's source material
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz In reply to EverythingReviewer [2015-06-12 23:12:22 +0000 UTC]
I'm surprised though that she didn't get frostbite from not having any footwear in the snow.
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz In reply to Tito-Mosquito [2014-12-27 08:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Aw, shucks.
Any thoughts on Serena being barefoot throughout most of the story?
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AshK1980 [2014-12-25 16:01:14 +0000 UTC]
Great work! Time to Fave this awesome story! Keep up the great work!
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Yvonne4ever [2014-12-25 13:53:46 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE This! It's soo amazing! Great job!
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Yvonne4ever In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2014-12-25 19:30:34 +0000 UTC]
Its a great story. The way you matched up the characters,the lack of grammatical erreors, the wording, i just loved it!
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ShadowGuardOfValor In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2014-12-25 06:19:21 +0000 UTC]
Well it kinda reminds me of an old school cartoon that was like a Christmas special
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ShadowGuardOfValor In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2014-12-25 06:24:50 +0000 UTC]
Yea a boy is tricked with shards of mirriors in his body and the girl looks for him brings back memories sounds boring huh?
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz In reply to ShadowGuardOfValor [2014-12-25 06:27:10 +0000 UTC]
It's actually an interesting idea. Not that there's anything wrong with Frozen of course.
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ShadowGuardOfValor In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2014-12-25 06:31:41 +0000 UTC]
Well no nothing's wrong with frozen but UR story is also like a revision of wat happened in a cartoon I watched years ago
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