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Description Chapter One – The Thief Prince

Luna walked down the long path leading to Forget-Me-Not valley. Sighing. A lot had happened in the years. Her family died when she was only eight, so she was raised in the Abbey. Those years were both good and bad at the same time. But those experiences taught her some important things; for instance, not to give up so easily. Her mother had left her a small plot of farmland in Forget-Me-Not valley for her to live on when she was old enough to work. Despite the fact that Luna hated getting dirty, she decided to fulfil her mother’s wishes.

She looked at the place she would be calling home. It was not that bad but it needed work.
“Ah, you must be Luna yes?” A voice asked her.
She turned around and saw that a middle-aged man dressed in red was talking to her. She nodded to answer. Luna was shy, so she was a bit quiet around strangers.
“I’m Thomas, mayor of Mineral Town…and in charge of shipments of Forget-Me-Not Valley as well. See that shipment box? Put things in there and I’ll collect them to be sold. Pretty basic. Any questions?”
“…Um Thomas? … If you’re the mayor of Mineral Town, how come you have to do Forget-Me-Not Valleys shipments…?”
“Ah… well let’s just say I had no choice. I’m the ‘temporary’ shipper, but I don’t know for how long…I should have picked scissors…dang it”
“Huh?”
“Oh sorry. Well I’ll come to pick shipments up at 5pm okay? I’m off now”
And he walked of. Confused, Luna looked at the farmland again.

She decided to walk around the Valley. Get acquainted with the townsfolk…in some way. In the end she walked to the spring. Sitting down and looking at the water rippling, She sighed again.
“Hello there, I don’t think I’ve seen you before… Are you that new farmer by any chance?”
Luna turned to see that someone was talking to her.
“Y-yes, I’m Luna…”
“Nice name. I’m Celia, I work at the farm near here.”
“Nice to meet you”
“Have you introduced yourself to anyone yet?”
“Um… not yet no…”
Celia giggled.
“Do you want me to introduce you to everyone? Today’s my day off anyway”
“You don’t mind? Thank you Celia”

So Celia introduced Luna to everyone. Luna became more confident to speaking to them after that. Celia liked Luna’s kindness to her…a stranger. And to everyone. They returned to the spring after that.

“Thank you Celia.”
“That’s okay. You looked like you needed help anyway.”
“Well… I am shy, but not when I know someone”
“Is that so? Well there no need to be shy anymore right?”
“Yeah”
“I need to go home now Luna. I’ll see you tomorrow”
“Bye Celia”

So Celia walked of home and Luna decided was about time she went home as well. She had a busy day tomorrow anyway.

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After a few days Luna began to get the hang of things. Farming was not as hard as she thought it was going to be. It took her a bit to clearout the field but in no time she was ordering for buildings to be constructed on her farm. Everyone was so nice to her as well, which made her feel at home.

“So then he said… and then he said… and then…”
“Bwahahaha you’re killing me Patrick!”
Luna sighed. It looks like Patrick and Kassey had drunk too much… again. She could hear their laugher whilst walking around the square. Even if it was late, she felt like she needed to take a walk. Then it got quite late. It was about time she went home. But as she was walking she bumped into someone.

“Oh…I’m sorry I was not looking were I was going…”
“Hehe, any chance of telling why you’re out walking so late?”
Luna looked at the person she bumped into. And became very quiet. He had slivery white hair and the most amazing sparkling emerald eyes. She finds her voce again.
“I… felt like it I guess”
“Really?”
“Um… who are you?”
“I’m just a prince for all the maidens to love”
Luna lost her voice again. This man sure was a smooth talker.
“And who may you be, beautiful?”
She decided to be a little brave.
“I’m Luna… I’m no-one special really.”
“Not special? Hehe…”
“HEY! Are you that famous thief that leaves notes before actually steeling things?”
Lumina was running down the path. Luna was quiet again, a thief huh? The man did not seem to panic much.
“Hehe looks like I’m a bit pressed for time. Gotta go”
He did not walk far before turning to face Luna again
“You can call me Phantom Skye”
Then he was gone, just like that. Luna was impressed.
“Dang I lost him…oh Luna! Hi!”
Lumina walked up to Luna
“Your out late…did you see anyone walk by here?”
“…N…no…”
“Oh well, at lest he did no steal anything… I think…”
“Well then Lumina…good night”
“Night Luna”

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It’s been a few days since then. Luna always seems to bump into that thief at night. Not deliberately. But she always seems to be where he is going to go. He did not stay in one place for long but he always smiled at Luna when he saw her. Luna would smile back.

Luna would think of him sometimes, whilst doing her work. But afterwards she would just continue to work. You could say that life in Abby has made her strong despite of her shyness.

“What are we going to do Muffy…?”
“I’m not sure Griffin…”
Luna walked into the Blue Bar to find Griffin and Muffy talking…and very worried. Muffy spotted her at the doorway.
“Oh Luna! Come in please…you’ve got good timing” Muffy said.
“I…have?”
“Maybe you can help us?”
“Muffy, your not being very clear…” Griffin said.
“Oh yeah…whoops”
Luna got confused
“We got a note from Phantom Skye…he’s coming at midnight to steal a drink” Muffy explained.
“Oh…”Luna mussed
“Would you mind helping us catch him Luna?” Griffin asked
“Um…okay”
“Great! Come back around eleven okay?”
“Got it”

When it turned 11pm Luna entered the blue bar. Muffy and Griffin were discussing what to do.

“Luna! Glad you could make it.” Muffy called to her.
“Were planning of waiting here until he comes. Then…” Griffin started to explain to Luna. Taking it all in.
“Hey…what’s that smell?” Muffy asked
“A smell?” Luna replied confused
“Yeah…it smells like curry,” Griffin said.
“I’m going to find the source,” Muffy said.
“I’ll come with you” Griffin followed Muffy out of the bar
“I’ll wait here then…” Luna sighed. She could not smell anything…

“Well…It’s seems like we were destined for our paths to be crossed Luna” a voice pulled Luna away from he thoughts. Skye was standing right inform of her.
“Destiny…? Well then, it must be destiny” Luna replied. Hardly believing what she just said.
“You believe in destiny to? Hehe… stand still…”
Luna was confused.
“Chick beam fire!”
Suddenly Luna could not move… she sighed heavily.
“You’ll be able to move again in an hour or so. Don’t worry” Skye said. He then went to the counter and started rummaging through the bottles.
“Skye, do you like being a thief?” Luna asked
“Maybe I do…Maybe I don’t” Skye chuckled
“So… you steal because you feel like it?”
“Hehe, you want to know more about me right? Well then Luna…I might tell you, if you catch me that is”
“Eh? Okay…”
“I can’t find the source…lets go back Muffy” Muffy and Griffin were coming back.
“Catch me if you can Luna” Skye said, his eyes full of mystery.
Luna blushed… For the first time for a long while, without another word Skye disappeared into the night. Luna closed her eyes, still unable to move.
“Oh Luna did he come?” Muffy asked
“Y-yeah, he took something… I couldn’t do anything… can’t move…” Luna replied.
“What…?” Muffy went to check the counters “The Okuhattan is gone”
“The oku-what?”
“Luna, were sorry for leaving you on your own.” Griffin said
“That’s okay…”
“So can you move now?”
“Y-yeah, I can”
“Well then, good night Luna… you must be tired”
“Good night you two”
“Sorry Luna…”
“Don’t worry about it”

Luna was walking home, before she turned to her farm she looked in the direction of the spring. “Phantom Skye… you’re so mysterious” Luna said to the thin air. She walked inside her house and began to write in her diary. Not quite tired yet. Writing her thoughts in the diaries pages.

There was a rustle of leaves as Phantom Skye was walking home…He heard Luna’s words, and felt strange. Unlike anything he had felt before. He put it aside to think about it later as he went into his home.
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Comments: 29

ElectricLiger1 [2012-06-25 08:57:08 +0000 UTC]

HUZZAH! THE LUNA HAS BEEN DOUBLED! <3 great story~

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StephanielovesDisney [2010-01-17 04:49:22 +0000 UTC]

I have to tell you this...
I have read this fanfic like a thousand times!!! I LOVE IT!!! It's the best skyexjill fanfic on this whole website!!! I <3 it!!!

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ChocoholicStar In reply to StephanielovesDisney [2010-01-18 20:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you are so sweet. <3
Thanks!

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StephanielovesDisney In reply to ChocoholicStar [2010-01-19 00:03:33 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome and thank YOU for putting this on here

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IDoodle16 [2009-09-20 07:21:18 +0000 UTC]

It defiantly has some good bones. it could use some editing tho, make it all a bit...thicker. it helps to read books a lot like i do, so you can get the usual format.

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X-Angel-13 [2009-06-14 14:32:55 +0000 UTC]

omg i LURV it! i read the whole thing it almost made me cry...i'm trying to write my own now...
3 cheers to you!

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iluvshadow [2009-01-22 21:35:36 +0000 UTC]

this is great! but when was his other name steiner?

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ChocoholicStar In reply to iluvshadow [2009-01-23 16:15:48 +0000 UTC]

Steiner is his Japanese name. Skye is the english version.

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iluvshadow In reply to ChocoholicStar [2009-01-23 21:39:38 +0000 UTC]

oh, thanks

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Celestial-moon-fire [2008-07-29 15:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Dose that really happen in the game with the bar?

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ChocoholicStar In reply to Celestial-moon-fire [2008-07-30 15:00:00 +0000 UTC]

umm... similar but not exact.
The dialogue and reactions are different.

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Celestial-moon-fire In reply to ChocoholicStar [2008-07-30 16:27:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay. He really uses CHICK-BEAM... flash?

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ChocoholicStar In reply to Celestial-moon-fire [2008-07-30 20:21:47 +0000 UTC]

yes he does

(when I first saw it I burst itno fits of giggles)

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Celestial-moon-fire In reply to ChocoholicStar [2008-07-31 17:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Wonder how it works...

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ChocoholicStar In reply to Celestial-moon-fire [2008-07-31 20:28:32 +0000 UTC]

A mystery...

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Celestial-moon-fire In reply to ChocoholicStar [2008-08-01 19:33:45 +0000 UTC]

I also wonder why he was not able to charm Vesta. Oh well. No ones perfect

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hawtpenguinlove [2008-07-14 00:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that was really good (:

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Jan-spirit-soldier [2008-07-08 23:09:05 +0000 UTC]

That was good... if i did meet you in rl i would me just like luna or if we meet on gaia i would be like that too... Im not really a fan girl of anyb ody or really interested in guys that way, im more of a supporter, i <3 reading fanfics yet when i try to write it all down from the beginning i seem to think of the best parts and get bored with typing the rest.

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ChocoholicStar In reply to Jan-spirit-soldier [2008-07-09 11:34:58 +0000 UTC]

^^
Thanks
Yeah, that happens with me as well.
rl means real life right?

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PhotoTini [2008-06-10 11:35:16 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! D:

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ChocoholicStar In reply to PhotoTini [2008-06-10 15:21:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

(don't ya mean or are you that shocked?)

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PhotoTini In reply to ChocoholicStar [2008-06-12 10:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Weellll xDDD Both lmao! xP

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ChocoholicStar In reply to PhotoTini [2008-06-12 10:58:15 +0000 UTC]

yay!!!

(I don't like seeing you sad...)

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PhotoTini In reply to ChocoholicStar [2008-06-12 11:41:10 +0000 UTC]

3:3


[Thanks hun.. Well i know you've always been there for me and stuff. We so have to meet up in the hols.<3]

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ChocoholicStar In reply to PhotoTini [2008-06-12 13:06:14 +0000 UTC]

oh yess!

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Beckyanime [2008-06-09 19:53:00 +0000 UTC]

wow this is real gd

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ChocoholicStar In reply to Beckyanime [2008-06-09 20:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank becky!
(and for the fav~)

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Shio1 [2008-06-09 18:43:44 +0000 UTC]

You should keep going it's really good.

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ChocoholicStar In reply to Shio1 [2008-06-09 20:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou~
that's just made my day

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