FOOLY-COOLY [2008-07-26 11:47:26 +0000 UTC]
Yay you finished it.I think it would make a good song, but as far as a poem goes, it doesn't really make sense in some areas. I like the rhythm to it, but it's inconsistent in a lot of parts.
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chocolateisgood In reply to FOOLY-COOLY [2008-07-26 23:44:30 +0000 UTC]
Yes well, that's what happens when you write something that you forgot what was about in the first place / you run out of colors...
FOOLY-COOLY In reply to chocolateisgood [2008-07-29 03:22:17 +0000 UTC]
Damn color spectrum.
chocolateisgood In reply to FOOLY-COOLY [2008-07-30 01:44:16 +0000 UTC]
It's a conspiracy, I tell you!
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