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Published: 2005-11-05 22:32:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Silver rain from overhead
Hits the ground a dark wine red
The grass will dance to the wind
Never knowing the greed of sin.

Thunder strikes the trees and trunks
Missing my heart as it sunk
Lightning bolts that spear the ground
And a light that was never found.

Running past an empty pond
My refleftion shows what lays beyond
Then a drop from the sky
Made the vision fade and die.
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Comments: 16

blowuptime [2005-11-07 02:23:19 +0000 UTC]

That is so amazingly good!

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chocolateisgood In reply to blowuptime [2005-11-07 22:57:51 +0000 UTC]

THANKYOU BESSEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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blowuptime In reply to chocolateisgood [2005-11-08 22:07:09 +0000 UTC]

NP!!
(btw, itz beesy)

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chocolateisgood In reply to blowuptime [2005-11-08 22:21:15 +0000 UTC]

huh??

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blowuptime In reply to chocolateisgood [2005-11-10 03:40:24 +0000 UTC]

idn

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chocolateisgood In reply to blowuptime [2005-11-10 03:49:21 +0000 UTC]

huh

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Kaitokuro1412 [2005-11-06 03:15:50 +0000 UTC]

omg kate take it off 'advanced critique encouraged'! thats for people who need comments to HELP them with their stuff!!

You rock Katryn! jk...Kate! e_e creativitYYYYY

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chocolateisgood In reply to Kaitokuro1412 [2005-11-07 00:04:19 +0000 UTC]

i use advanced critque so ppl can tell me how to make it even better if it needs it

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Kaitokuro1412 In reply to chocolateisgood [2005-11-07 00:58:00 +0000 UTC]

k

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chocolateisgood In reply to Kaitokuro1412 [2005-11-07 23:15:33 +0000 UTC]

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Kaitokuro1412 In reply to chocolateisgood [2005-11-08 01:11:23 +0000 UTC]

woo

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chocolateisgood In reply to Kaitokuro1412 [2005-11-08 22:25:10 +0000 UTC]

uhhhhhhhhhhhhh........

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FOOLY-COOLY [2005-11-05 22:40:00 +0000 UTC]

wau! another nice poem!! but i dont understad why its called something..

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chocolateisgood In reply to FOOLY-COOLY [2005-11-07 00:09:14 +0000 UTC]

i called it that cuz i dudnt kno wat else to call it...hehehe

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FOOLY-COOLY In reply to chocolateisgood [2005-11-07 00:36:31 +0000 UTC]

:^.^:

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chocolateisgood In reply to FOOLY-COOLY [2005-11-07 23:16:44 +0000 UTC]

=G

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