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Published: 2011-07-15 15:52:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 524; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 23
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Description The Field-Mouse from Five Fields (Carcanet, 1998) by Gillian Clarke

Summer, and the long grass is a snare drum.
The air hums with jets.
Down at the end of the meadow,
far from the radio's terrible news,
we cut the hay. All afternoon
its wave breaks before the tractor blade.
Over the hedge our neighbour travels his field
in a cloud of lime, drifting our land
with a chance gift of sweetness.

The child comes running through the killed flowers,
his hands a nest of quivering mouse,
its black eyes two sparks burning.
We know it will die and ought to finish it off.
It curls in agony big as itself
and the star goes out in its eye.
Summer in Europe, the field's hurt,
and the children kneel in long grass,
staring at what we have crushed.

Before day's done the field lies bleeding,
the dusk garden inhabited by the saved, voles,
frogs, a nest of mice. The wrong that woke
from a rumour of pain won't heal,
and we can't face the newspapers.
All night I dream the children dance in grass
their bones brittle as mouse-ribs, the air
stammering with gunfire, my neighbour turned
stranger, wounding my land with stones.
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Comments: 15

Vrinda-the-Wistful [2017-08-29 18:50:10 +0000 UTC]

graceful in death ...

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chriseastmids In reply to Vrinda-the-Wistful [2017-08-29 20:14:35 +0000 UTC]

we musnt be sad .... life takes many turns

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Vrinda-the-Wistful In reply to chriseastmids [2017-08-29 20:16:09 +0000 UTC]

that's the truth.

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HalfFormedThoughts [2017-06-06 09:38:34 +0000 UTC]

You've found it!!! Sad but beautiful!

And all is always now..

And 'now' is all we have


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chriseastmids In reply to HalfFormedThoughts [2017-06-06 18:34:27 +0000 UTC]

i did ... your right Ursula we have "now"

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chryssalis [2011-07-17 11:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful....WONDERFUL...

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chriseastmids In reply to chryssalis [2011-07-17 12:00:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much

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KDMB [2011-07-15 18:08:55 +0000 UTC]

it makes me sad, yes, but such a brilliant shot.....and look, his life is indeed remembered.....I want to picture him rambling the fields....indeed. I love nests of tiny creatures in the fields.....

and the words....wow.

thanks for remembering my friend. I will have to study it all later.....words and image, so powerful.

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chriseastmids In reply to KDMB [2011-07-15 19:28:45 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome ... i couldnt believe it when i saw it ... but i had to ask you first as i didnt want you to be too sad

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candysamuels [2011-07-15 16:43:33 +0000 UTC]

wow..

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chriseastmids In reply to candysamuels [2011-07-15 16:48:45 +0000 UTC]

such tiny little feet ...

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candysamuels In reply to chriseastmids [2011-07-15 17:04:36 +0000 UTC]

I know poor thing..

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chriseastmids In reply to candysamuels [2011-07-15 17:46:17 +0000 UTC]

it looked so delicate

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candysamuels In reply to chriseastmids [2011-07-15 18:02:24 +0000 UTC]

oh..that is sad...poor baby..

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chriseastmids In reply to candysamuels [2011-07-15 18:19:51 +0000 UTC]

i know

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