doomdib777 [2004-05-31 04:55:46 +0000 UTC]
The way the lines are set up looks weird. You might want to fix that, so it looks better. But the flow and choice of words is trés bien. I can relate to this poem muchly.
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B1uRav3n [2004-05-31 04:20:51 +0000 UTC]
you have talent, yes you do!! keep up the nice work CJ, its awesome!
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