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Published: 2007-06-23 19:38:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 10811; Favourites: 69; Downloads: 0
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finally!!!my 1st comics~~~~ XD hah~~~this is the page 1 of it~~~havent put the dialog yet~~~hmm~~~kinda confusing when doing the screen tones~~~ X( anyway, hope u guys leave ur comments here, so that i can improve my weak points~~~~
pencil and inked in B4 size manga paper.....and it's FROM LEFT TO RIGHT~~~~~
AND and and AND!!this is an 8 pages only short extra story....i wanna try my luck in a comics company with this 8 pages comics, then only will decide wanna do the original long story of this~~~
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What kind of pen u used for the outlines? the lines are so thin and crisp!^^
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Great way to start a comic-book. Sort of catches your attention from the first panel.
I'm waiting for the dialogue!
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whoa this looks pretty good, i can't wait for you to put some dialogue. I want to know what's going on! XD
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Amazing lines here, man!
I really love the 4th panel XD
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wow!!really?!XDglad that u like that!!!!
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The only real problem in this page is in the final panel: while the angle you've chosen is cool, the scale is not right: look closely, the character looks huge in comparison to the building and the container. I think that if he started walking, his head would reach the height of the first floor, really. The panel is really dramatic and well done, but remember always to keep an eye on the correct proportions.
On the other hand, I love the angle on the first panel. Good one!
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O.o oops!!!thanks for the tips dude!!!!well, i'll keep it up since this is my 1st ever comics~~~ XD
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Don't worry, I'm sure you'll have these problems solved in no time
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How the hell do you manage your comic pages look so freaking cool??... Dude, you're god!!
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I realised before that you are skilled but that is .. awesome ^^/
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lol~~~~use my hand to grab something to draw~~~ XD hah~~~~thanks for digging it man!! XD
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thanks!!! XD urs are great too!!
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thanks man!!how r u doing now?ok with the new job?
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ok la, CUE got senior teach me de, if not i should dead so early thousand years jor. i love yr skecthing so much man!
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lol!!thanks!!!hmm~~~seems like u r doing well there~~~~
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thanks!!!! XD glad u dig it!!
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faster come out d 2nd page~~hehe~~i'm waiting oo~~
nice work there~~my fren
it will b d good portfolio for u if u finish this short comic~
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YEAH~~~~~~~~haha~~~~it's good to have ur words man~~~
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Walaoeh...I love your lineart! You can use screentone now? O.o I don't know how to use that, I use the tones on the computer. >.<
This is really nice, wow..you keep on improving!
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hah~~~~~lol i use photoshop do create my own screen tones~~~ XD and really thanks for the compliments!!!!yay~~~~ XD
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thanks!!y havent u post up something yet?XD hah
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thanks!!hah~~~~i draw it accordingly to my eyes~~~hahaha~~~ XD
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GLAD THAT U DIG IT!!! XD thanks!!!
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excellent work chris, maybe the third panel need more work in the perspective, but the page looks very cool
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thanks for ur critique man!!!
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yes, te background need a litle more of work i think
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fuuu, that rocks man ! Hope this project will grow into somethin big XP
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i hope so too!!! XD yay!!!!thasnks for the compliment anyway!! XD
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lol!!!!!meanwhile i'm waiting for urs too!! XD
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you'v improved(again) dear... unbelievable!
Ganpate
you hv my FULL support.... Always...
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