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Description Sketch time again, trying to improve general composition!

What's the thoughts on this one?
I'd love to hear what I can improve upon!
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Comments: 27

dingosnivysprint12 [2014-07-11 00:34:58 +0000 UTC]

This looks great! I'm not an expert, but I would work on the back legs. The upper part seems bent a bit when it should be curved straight down. Other than that it, looks great Β 

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Chrispy248 In reply to dingosnivysprint12 [2014-07-11 08:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I do agree, the back legs definitely need some work ill be making sure to correct them in my next piece, I really need to get working Β on something xD it's been nearly a week since I actually drew anything D: but thank you very much

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dingosnivysprint12 In reply to Chrispy248 [2014-07-11 16:34:29 +0000 UTC]

I hope it wasn't harsh feedback. I don't like giving feedback because sometimes I can come up a bit harsh I know some people who don't appreciate that either XD Anyways, can't wait to see more drawings from you!Β 

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Chrispy248 In reply to dingosnivysprint12 [2014-07-12 12:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh no it wasnt too harsh at all! If people dont point out where I can improve I'll never know!
Thank I'll be trying to get something worth uploading drawn this weekend :3Β 

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dingosnivysprint12 In reply to Chrispy248 [2014-07-13 05:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Can't wait I have some people tell me what I should improve on too. I'm a self-taught artist though Sometimes I learn by looking at other people's art and their techniques and sometimes I look at the outside world!Β 

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Slasher0001 [2014-07-10 01:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Cute
Great drawing!

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Chrispy248 In reply to Slasher0001 [2014-07-11 08:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much

New account?

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Slasher0001 In reply to Chrispy248 [2014-07-11 17:13:42 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean by "new account"?

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Chrispy248 In reply to Slasher0001 [2014-07-12 11:37:51 +0000 UTC]

I coulda sworn you had an account called slasher1001 D:

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Slasher0001 In reply to Chrispy248 [2014-07-12 17:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Nope, this has been my only account on here. The only site where my screen name is different is Youtube, and it's only an extra 1 at the end.

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Chrispy248 In reply to Slasher0001 [2014-07-12 22:05:38 +0000 UTC]

That's odd xDΒ 
Ah well, I try and keep my username consistent also, but that rarely happens :/

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CaptainBMX [2014-07-06 16:49:58 +0000 UTC]

I think it looks fine to me man. I love that deep outline on it.

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Chrispy248 In reply to CaptainBMX [2014-07-07 20:17:52 +0000 UTC]

I got some great help from the sub-reddit that I'm part of, there are some really great artists there who actually are willing to lend a hand :3

But thanks man! I need to work on the legs though, they look kinda odd

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CaptainBMX In reply to Chrispy248 [2014-07-09 22:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Lol They look kinda like funny chess pieces hehe

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Chrispy248 In reply to CaptainBMX [2014-07-10 20:28:44 +0000 UTC]

That they do xD I should make them look like cheese next time

I havent drawn a changling in Β a while D:

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CaptainBMX In reply to Chrispy248 [2014-07-13 01:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Maybe that is the next road you should head down. That certainly would be cool.

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Chrispy248 In reply to CaptainBMX [2014-07-20 16:02:43 +0000 UTC]

hmm, changling.... interesting...

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AppleBeard [2014-07-06 14:01:13 +0000 UTC]

very cute indeed and to give you something to improve on, hmm... the back legs do look a tad funny where the knee is.. but yeah besides that its great

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Chrispy248 In reply to AppleBeard [2014-07-07 20:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man :3Β 
The back leg looks like its pointed too far inward towards the body in comparison to the general pose, so that is definitely something I do need to work on!

I have to say I do feel like I have improved some since the start of this year :3Β 

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AppleBeard In reply to Chrispy248 [2014-07-08 01:44:20 +0000 UTC]

You have definitely improved a lot dude!Β 
looking back at your art from the start of this year, you can see that you have improve a great deal which is great!

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Chrispy248 In reply to AppleBeard [2014-07-10 20:29:34 +0000 UTC]

Wooo Thanks man
Only now I have embark on proper shading D:
Another looong learning curve D:

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KomdivGarsii [2014-07-03 12:57:42 +0000 UTC]

Still amazing, yes!

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Chrispy248 In reply to KomdivGarsii [2014-07-04 22:34:19 +0000 UTC]

I dont know about that man but thanks :3

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KomdivGarsii In reply to Chrispy248 [2014-07-14 03:24:47 +0000 UTC]

De nada!

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0Rares0 [2014-06-30 19:55:09 +0000 UTC]

Cute

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Chrispy248 In reply to 0Rares0 [2014-07-04 22:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Danke!

You share the same Icon as JHaller on skype xD

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0Rares0 In reply to Chrispy248 [2014-07-13 03:16:22 +0000 UTC]

I do? Β  ah guess I gotta change it x3

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