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Chrissyissypoo19 — Oyfn pripetshik (A happier character sketch!) by-nc-nd

Published: 2012-10-13 20:40:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2447; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 45
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Description So as promised to some of my friends, here's a happier character sketch of Benjamin and Amichai from my story The Unknown Martyr.

This is what my characters would've looked like if they weren't sent to Dachau death camp.

The song in the background is a traditonal Yiddish lullaby, written in the Northeastern dialect, called "Ofyn Pripetshik (Pripetchik)" or "On the cooking stove" and basically talks about a rabbi teaching children the alphabet. It's such a sad/haunting sounding song, but very beautiful. Here's a link to the one I listened to-- [link]

What Benji is saying is in Hebrew, though, and reads, "I love you, Daddy (Abba)" because in the story he also refers to Amichai as like a second father.

I used both Hebrew and Yiddish to represent the interesting diverse languages of the Jewish culture.
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Comments: 73

LadyData [2015-04-18 09:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is beautiful! You write Hebrew and Yiddish very well I'm currently trying to teach myself Hebrew the old fashioned way (library books) for my sci-fi OC who is an Israeli-Jew I'm still trying to learn the Hebrew alphabet and common phrases.

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to LadyData [2015-04-18 16:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm not too fluent in it, but I know some stuff since Yiddish has Germanic roots to it, since I speak German But  I actually had to look up the Hebrew Wish I could speak it though! That would be awesome! But the only foreign languages I can speak are German and Polish.

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LadyData In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2015-04-19 03:29:33 +0000 UTC]

That's wonderful! Unfortunately, I don't know how to speak German nor Polish but I do recognize a couple of German terms here and there . Besides English I speak Spanish and I'm currently taking an Italian language course because I want to write Italian songs for my sci-fi story since the protagonist of my story is a singer. I wish I knew how to speak Hebrew and Yiddish too! I often get confused with the Hebrew alphabet and gender-addressing (male speaker to female and vice versa). I'm not sure if Yiddish follows this or not?

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to LadyData [2015-04-19 03:34:11 +0000 UTC]

I think Yiddish might follow similar rules, but I, too am not sure lol But it would be super sweet to learn! Oh! You must tell me how Italian is! Is it hard?

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LadyData In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2015-07-01 05:39:18 +0000 UTC]

(Oh dear I apologize for replying to this late but I've been so busy that I've let my inbox get full )

Italian is similar to Spanish and it can be easy if you have been exposed to a Romance language. However, the only thing that I struggle with is confusing certain Italian terms for Spanish terms and vice versa. 

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StriatonTrioFan7 [2013-11-02 18:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Smack Dab in the Feels!

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to StriatonTrioFan7 [2013-11-02 19:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Lol nice!

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cereal-in-a-bowl [2013-09-17 16:57:24 +0000 UTC]

I would really love to learn Hebrew....

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to cereal-in-a-bowl [2013-09-17 17:00:01 +0000 UTC]

same here! I only know a couple phrases, but I think it would be interesting to pick up

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cereal-in-a-bowl In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2013-09-17 17:13:37 +0000 UTC]

They don't offer Hebrew language classes where I live...T_____T

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to cereal-in-a-bowl [2013-09-17 17:19:31 +0000 UTC]

I don't think they do here either, but there are language courses online I know you can take. I always have considered it. 

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cereal-in-a-bowl In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2013-09-17 17:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Really? Why don't they? Forgive my ignorance...as I thought the western country would be more...um...open minded to learning different languages?

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to cereal-in-a-bowl [2013-09-20 16:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh we are, it's just smaller schools don't have as many language classes. For example my university only has Spanish. But at public schools like Madison at our capital, they probably have a whole list of different languages you can take. 

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cereal-in-a-bowl In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2013-09-21 15:38:47 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could learn Latin or Hebrew....I think some priests learn Latin when they enter the Catholic church as practising priests.

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to cereal-in-a-bowl [2013-09-21 17:06:54 +0000 UTC]

I would LOVE to learn Latin! and you're right, there are many seminarians who are required to take Latin before becoming a priest, I can't wait to incorporate that into my next story!  

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cereal-in-a-bowl In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2013-09-21 23:10:40 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to read it...

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to cereal-in-a-bowl [2013-09-21 23:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Excellent! I have it up now! XDDD

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cereal-in-a-bowl In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2013-09-22 06:30:46 +0000 UTC]

Where?! Where?!!!!!!

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OriginofDay [2012-10-15 04:32:05 +0000 UTC]

My life asdfnasdghkjflhasdfkjhaskjdf so happy because of this!!

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to OriginofDay [2012-10-15 22:53:34 +0000 UTC]

Omg! thanks a bunch! I'm glad you like it!

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MissEljebel [2012-10-13 22:34:58 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!! This is too cute!!! I love it so much!!!

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to MissEljebel [2012-10-13 22:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Danke! i'm glad you do! It felt good to finally draw a happy one of these two!

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MissEljebel In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 22:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Bitte! That's good!

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to MissEljebel [2012-10-13 22:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Deustch! ja! sehr gut!

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MissEljebel In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 22:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!!

^Doesn't know much German

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to MissEljebel [2012-10-13 22:47:07 +0000 UTC]

lol that's alright! if you ever get the chance, you should take a class, it's a very interesting language to learn, and very easy!

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MissEljebel In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 23:10:08 +0000 UTC]

I would love to take German!!! I'm taking Spanish right now though

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to MissEljebel [2012-10-13 23:13:20 +0000 UTC]

I took spanish for about 5 years, but i don't really remember a word of it! XDDD

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MissEljebel In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 23:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha did you ever use it since you learned it? If you didn't then maybe that's why. My dad learned German when he was in college and he never used it so now he doesn't remember any German except for all the basic stuff haha

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to MissEljebel [2012-10-13 23:22:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I don't use spanish anymore! XDDD
I actually use German a lot more than i thought i would, since I have a lot of German friends on here and Facebook I can read in spanish alright, but i don't speak it anymore.

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MissEljebel In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 23:24:22 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha!!!
That's awesome!!! I never use Spanish, only at school in my Spanish class

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to MissEljebel [2012-10-13 23:30:43 +0000 UTC]

EXACTLY HOW I FELT!!! That's why i took German. and it's funny every time i go on vacation, i always run into a German couple or something! XDDD

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MissEljebel In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 23:32:50 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome!!! When I went to Mexico and Costa Rica, I didn't have to use Spanish at all!!!

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to MissEljebel [2012-10-13 23:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Fo real? dude! that's awesome...man, the farthest i was ever out of the country was 5 min in Canadian water...during a boat tour...in Lake Superior livin the dream,

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MissEljebel In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 23:40:05 +0000 UTC]

That still sounds fun All the countries I've been to are USA (duh I live here), Mexico (twice), Costa Rica, Grand Cayman and Jamaica

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to MissEljebel [2012-10-13 23:56:42 +0000 UTC]

Lucky!

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MissEljebel In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-14 01:31:29 +0000 UTC]

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Burning-Night [2012-10-13 21:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Aaah! They look so happy! QAQ
Why can't it always be like this?? QxQ

Aw, shucks! The song isn't available for Germany! =n=

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to Burning-Night [2012-10-13 21:44:06 +0000 UTC]

naww thanks a bunch bud!
I know, i know...

I can get you a link from Youtube, unless the link at the bottom didn't work.
You have me on skype, right?

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Burning-Night In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 21:53:47 +0000 UTC]

I don't know about that, copyright stuff is serious business here, so most music related videos are not available (or are disabled after some time) :C

But nevermind! I found the song! But I'm not sure if it's the same version you were listening to, I guess that's not that important XP

And sadly, no, I don't have you on skype.
In fact, I must be the only person on the internet that doesn't even HAVE skype

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to Burning-Night [2012-10-13 21:59:24 +0000 UTC]

oh wow! hmmm, I'm kinda curious as to which version you found though

YOU DON'T HAVE SKYPE!??! lol jk! it's alright, i just recently got mine!

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Burning-Night In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 22:04:24 +0000 UTC]

I found a version sung by Esther Ofarim [link]
You were right, it's really haunting! QAQ

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to Burning-Night [2012-10-13 22:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh my! that one is very pretty!
I dont' know if this'll work but here's the link to one of the versions i listened to [link]

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Burning-Night In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 22:35:16 +0000 UTC]

No, it doesn't work, sorry XD
The information says that it's not available due to some pictures in it. Considering it's a holocaust remembrance I'm guessing it has Nazi pictures in it? o.o
Those are forbidden to be shown here (only not in history books and documentations), so maybe that's why o3o

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to Burning-Night [2012-10-13 22:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Well turds! yeah it did...hmmmm, that version was my fave...OH! wait! here's a different one, it's a little shorter though [link] It's from Schindler's List.

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Burning-Night In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 22:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Hang on, if it's from the SChindler's list soundtack then maybe I found it...is a choir singing it? o.o

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to Burning-Night [2012-10-13 22:58:13 +0000 UTC]

I think so, it's like a boy's choir.

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Burning-Night In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 22:54:58 +0000 UTC]

That one's not available due to Copyright! XD

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Chrissyissypoo19 In reply to Burning-Night [2012-10-13 22:57:17 +0000 UTC]

MEH!!!! Gall darn it Youtube!

I SHALL WIN!!! try this one [link]

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Burning-Night In reply to Chrissyissypoo19 [2012-10-13 22:58:32 +0000 UTC]

yup! That one's working! XD
Thank you! >3<

YOU WOOON!! >D

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