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Published: 2016-03-07 14:05:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 480; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 3
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Description "Knowledge has its seat in the head; it is the eye of desire, and can become the pilot of the soul." - Will Durant

Wow, this took me forever to finish and went through a lot of revisions to get the idea just right! I'm pretty new to photomanipulation so tips are very appreciated! 



Stock Used:
Mountains  -- AlzirrSwanheartStock
Sky  -- mindym306
Hot Air Balloons  -- FairieGoodMother
Model -- faestock
Fabric (large) -- AlzirrSwanheartStock
Fabric (small) -- FairieGoodMother
Open Book -- AbsurdWordPreferred
Stack of Books -- Inadesign-Stock


Update:
Made some changes to it following some advice! Mostly making the mountains and sky look more compatible, and putting the balloons a little more out of focus.

Update #2:
Got some more advice so made some more changes!  I tried to make the girl match the colour a little more, as well as the fabric while I was at it. It hasn't completely solved the problem of her seeming like part of the image but I have an essay I need to work on rn so it'll have to wait a few days 
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Comments: 24

Comments4You [2016-05-01 10:05:42 +0000 UTC]

This is really excellent and profound! I think it goes to show that the sky's the limit if you have dreams and it's always good to go a little preparation on the ground beforehand ^^

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chronicled In reply to Comments4You [2016-05-02 04:29:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! 

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Comments4You In reply to chronicled [2016-05-02 12:21:56 +0000 UTC]

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KCHuang [2016-04-28 16:33:02 +0000 UTC]

It definitely looks better now though. Maybe adding harder shadows under her? Right now they're pretty soft, which  usually indicates the object casting the shadow is farther away.

Good luck on your essay! 

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chronicled In reply to KCHuang [2016-04-30 11:37:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! And I never really thought of that! In fact all this time I'd been making them softer (oops!)  I'll definitely have a play with the shadows! 

Thank you! 

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KCHuang [2016-04-22 17:30:33 +0000 UTC]

Really awesome concept! I'm a sucker for surrealism I'm not a manipulator so I don't know how to give concrete advice, all I can say is that the balloons look really good (like actually part of the photo!) The girl still doesn't quite match the coloring/lighting I think. But I don't know any tips on how to fix it...

Overall I really like the concept though, great perspective and composition

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chronicled In reply to KCHuang [2016-04-23 15:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!  And thanks for the advice! I've been feeling that about the girl too but I wasn't sure how to fix it either  But I'll look through some tutorials on it though and play with the lighting and colour in the next few days! 

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Lora-Vysotskaya [2016-04-09 06:35:48 +0000 UTC]

Nice work!

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chronicled In reply to Lora-Vysotskaya [2016-04-09 17:15:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 

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Lora-Vysotskaya In reply to chronicled [2016-04-10 10:53:59 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Mixxylicious [2016-03-21 17:58:06 +0000 UTC]

you could color balance both the mountain and the sky and make the edges of the mountain just a little softer so its not super sharp 

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Mixxylicious In reply to Mixxylicious [2016-03-21 17:59:16 +0000 UTC]

but overall its good

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chronicled In reply to Mixxylicious [2016-03-21 18:08:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! And thank you for the advice! I'll definitely try that out! I did colour balance the mountains a little but I don't think I did anything to the sky so they did stay seeming a bit unblended  

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Mixxylicious In reply to chronicled [2016-03-21 18:14:29 +0000 UTC]

no problemo!! i can give you a little more advice if you want :3

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chronicled In reply to Mixxylicious [2016-03-21 18:29:13 +0000 UTC]

That'd be awesome! But only if you'd like to! Even just linking me to some good tutorials would help a great deal!

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Mixxylicious In reply to chronicled [2016-03-22 03:18:34 +0000 UTC]

really simple photoshops like the ones on this:
design.tutsplus.com/categories…

i just pick ones that look interesting and do them, sometimes while doing em u get new info like "omg i didnt know that" and like use it for ur newest art... at least thats how i got better

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chronicled In reply to Mixxylicious [2016-03-22 13:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I'll have a look through some of them!   I've read some of their pixel art ones before and they're quite good for learning new stuff!

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Mixxylicious In reply to chronicled [2016-03-22 14:06:21 +0000 UTC]

mhmm <3 you're welcome to send me notes if you want to ask anything

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chronicled In reply to Mixxylicious [2016-03-22 14:10:34 +0000 UTC]

 Thank you for helping me out so much!

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Mixxylicious In reply to chronicled [2016-03-22 15:07:50 +0000 UTC]

no problemo!!

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hardgoods [2016-03-07 14:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Very cool! Always like something done well, and with a positive message.

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chronicled In reply to hardgoods [2016-03-07 14:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!  Yeah, positive messages are always super refreshing!

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hardgoods In reply to chronicled [2016-03-07 17:21:01 +0000 UTC]

Create more when you get the time and inspiration.

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chronicled In reply to hardgoods [2016-03-08 07:54:23 +0000 UTC]

I definitely will!

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