chalchihuitlicue [2005-04-11 14:02:45 +0000 UTC]
Not bad, but you might want to try to make his "Look" a little more original. When I saw him, I instantly thought of two Final Fantasy Characters, and Shino from Naruto, because that's what he looks like. Give him something original to make him stand out, or no one's going to look twice at your comic.
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chrosis In reply to chalchihuitlicue [2005-04-11 18:17:54 +0000 UTC]
That's actually supposed to be a big part of his character.
He's kinda supposed to be cliche.
What makes him stand out is his battle style.
But I won't hint anymore.
He doesn't appear until chapter 2...
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