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Published: 2005-04-10 20:54:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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My comic, which I'm really trucking along on (all cept the website) stars a limited cast of heroes, one of whom is...Jack, the Master Swordsman.
He has a cool yet very complicated story, but other than that, he is very much the only two dimensional character.
I suppose I'll start posting the comics on DA, cause a website seems like two much trouble.
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Posting the first one now.
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Not bad, but you might want to try to make his "Look" a little more original. When I saw him, I instantly thought of two Final Fantasy Characters, and Shino from Naruto, because that's what he looks like. Give him something original to make him stand out, or no one's going to look twice at your comic.
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That's actually supposed to be a big part of his character.
He's kinda supposed to be cliche.
What makes him stand out is his battle style.
But I won't hint anymore.
He doesn't appear until chapter 2...
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