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Published: 2005-03-31 20:57:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 2491; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 156
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Errrrrr....I dun really like how this turned out even after I spent so much effort on it T__T The lineart had lots of potential, honest, but the cg is a bit
Well....I guess all I really like are the tail's translucent fins and the water-ish stuff >__<;; Ah well...maybe it'll be better next time ^^ Common mina-chan, critique this pic to death, I'd really appreciate it (even if I prob won't change THIS pic, but maybe the next one 
)Media: OpenCanvas 1.1
WARNING: some skin, not much, but some
Okay, u wonderful peeps ^^ I am definately going to edit this pic when I get the chance to, regardless of what I said earlier!! I'm been getting lots of helpful advice n I can't just ignore it, can I??? hehehehe
Thankies so very much for all the help you guys!! I'd never improve w/o you!!!
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Comments: 12
thats a really good picture but its just not sora... i like it tho
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OMG! I just love this. Not much to critque on. You did a good job overall!
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This piccy rocks, dude!! O_o You did so good! I don't see anything wrong with... but it might just be me, but there's something about his face... I dunno, I'm not wearing glasses right now.
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That is really really pretty. I love how you made his mermaid design look more realistic, with the scales all over him and the fin things. The water and the sand is very well done as well, not to mention the cute little seagulls n__n The only critique I can offer is that his eyes seem a little too far apart, other than that this is a lovely piece.
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Oh wow, this piccie is very pretty! I lurve what you did to his lips! The colors are awesome and Sora looks awesome! Keep it up! ^__^
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Gah, yeah i hate it when that happens. I think it would have been cute with your usual big eyes, cause with the way they are now they seem a little too far apart. But the scales and the coloring on the tail are great 
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"The lineart had lots of potential, honest, but the cg is a bit :cough: :cough:"
The CG is not one bit "cough!" It is not cough at all!
Anyway, I definitely like his eyes. My most recent pic was Sora (First time drawing him- Ack.) And it looks nowhere as cool as this! The effect of the mermaid part on the lower half of his body is just... O.o wow.
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Awwww...ur too nice ^^
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Aaaaahh.. So pretty. O__O I love the water and the beach. And the composition; how he's just looking up at you like that. It's so cute. ;__; The bottle's a nice touch too. :3
Critique? Uh.. Geeze. Hmm; I think his arms are a smidge too short in comparision to the rest of him; but that may just be the perspective
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