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ciaossuu — tomoe tachibana
Published: 2010-05-29 21:08:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Eyes stare straight at me,
with expectation,
with pride,
and with so many emotions.

Can't you see
all that you have done
is just made me reach higher than I can?

I cannot reach the clouds in the sky
I cannot reach Mars
I am not a legendary person.

I am normal.
I save lives.
Why can't you be proud of that?
Why do I have to follow tradition?
Your eyes silently strangle me,
they have pride and joy in culture.

Not in who I really am.

I cannot look into someone's eyes because of this.
Help me find someone to look into,
that does not look at me like that.
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Comments: 6

asianrice231 [2011-05-23 22:44:06 +0000 UTC]

I love it! Such emotion!

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ciaossuu In reply to asianrice231 [2011-07-03 06:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ;v;

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asianrice231 In reply to ciaossuu [2011-07-03 15:18:34 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome~

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Sandraacute [2010-05-29 22:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh don't say that! I just amazing and I love it... I hope I can write poetry like that ;_;

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ciaossuu In reply to Sandraacute [2010-05-29 22:03:27 +0000 UTC]

All you gotta do is slap on an inspiring song to listen to, (like the Metal Gear Solid songs), and write. Muse comes, it very comes.

You will one day. Experiences form into writing.

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Sandraacute In reply to ciaossuu [2010-05-29 22:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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