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Description
a scene from the Fourth Apprentice.

Do not Post spoilers for The Fourth Apprentice here, I haven't read it yet!

Characters;

Main White tom with blue eyes: Cloudtail
Creamy tom with amber eyes; Berrynose
Grey & white she-cat in front; Hazeltail
Torti & white she-cat in front; Blossompaw
White she-cat in front; Icecloud
Orange tabby tom in front; Lionblaze

Black tom with blue eyes; Reedwhisker
Dark brown she-cat with green eyes; Otterheart
Light Gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes; Graymist
Grey and white tom with; Sneezepaw

no major spoilers, just a little plot ahead

This is late in chapter 1, when a thunderclan goes to the lake for some water. A drought has caused all there streams to dry up, and Riverclan has laid claim to all the fish in the lake because of there prey shortage.

Scene

it's not as much as it looks like

As they approached the waters edge, he saw the
Riverclan cats had clustered together and were waiting for them, blocking there way; Reedwhisker and Graymist, with Otterheart and her apprentice, Sneezepaw. They all looked thin and exaughsted, but there eyes glittered with hostility and there fur was bristling as if they would jump into battle for a couple of mousetails.
Reedwhisker stepped foward. "Have you forgotten what Leopardstar told you at the Gathering last night?" He Challenged. "The Fish in the Lake belong to Riverclan."
"Were not her to fish" Cloudtail replied calmly, setting down his moss. "We only want water. You're not going to deny us that, are you?"
"Are there no streams in your territory?" Graymist demanded.
"The streams have dried up, as you know very well" Lionblaze saw the tip of Cloudtail's tail twitch irritably as he answered: the fiery white warrior was finding it hard to control his temper. "We need water from the lake."
"And we'll take it whether you like it or not." Berrynose added, dropping his moss and taking a threatening step forward.
Instantly the four Riverclan cats slid out their claws. "The lake belongs to us." Otterheart hissed.
Cloustail whipped around to face his patrol. "keep your jaws shut!" he ordered Berrynose.
"Are you going to let them talk to us like that?" Berrynose challenged. "I'm not scared of them, even if you are."
Cloudtail stepped forward until he was nose to nose with the younger warrior, his eyes like chips of ice. "One more word and you'll be searching the elders for ticks for the next moon. Understand?"

and Min-mew, this is my back-up entry for your contest if the other isn't acceptable.

Description
a scene from the Fourth Apprentice.

Do not Post spoilers for The Fourth Apprentice here, I haven't read it yet!

Characters;

Main White tom with blue eyes: Cloudtail
Creamy tom with amber eyes; Berrynose
Grey & white she-cat in front; Hazeltail
Torti & white she-cat in front; Blossompaw
White she-cat in front; Icecloud
Orange tabby tom in front; Lionblaze

Black tom with blue eyes; Reedwhisker
Dark brown she-cat with green eyes; Otterheart
Light Gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes; Graymist
Grey and white tom with; Sneezepaw

no major spoilers, just a little plot ahead

This is late in chapter 1, when a thunderclan goes to the lake for some water. A drought has caused all there streams to dry up, and Riverclan has laid claim to all the fish in the lake because of there prey shortage.

Scene

it's not as much as it looks like

As they approached the waters edge, he saw the
Riverclan cats had clustered together and were waiting for them, blocking there way; Reedwhisker and Graymist, with Otterheart and her apprentice, Sneezepaw. They all looked thin and exaughsted, but there eyes glittered with hostility and there fur was bristling as if they would jump into battle for a couple of mousetails.
Reedwhisker stepped foward. "Have you forgotten what Leopardstar told you at the Gathering last night?" He Challenged. "The Fish in the Lake belong to Riverclan."
"Were not her to fish" Cloudtail replied calmly, setting down his moss. "We only want water. You're not going to deny us that, are you?"
"Are there no streams in your territory?" Graymist demanded.
"The streams have dried up, as you know very well" Lionblaze saw the tip of Cloudtail's tail twitch irritably as he answered: the fiery white warrior was finding it hard to control his temper. "We need water from the lake."
"And we'll take it whether you like it or not." Berrynose added, dropping his moss and taking a threatening step forward.
Instantly the four Riverclan cats slid out their claws. "The lake belongs to us." Otterheart hissed.
Cloustail whipped around to face his patrol. "keep your jaws shut!" he ordered Berrynose.
"Are you going to let them talk to us like that?" Berrynose challenged. "I'm not scared of them, even if you are."
Cloudtail stepped forward until he was nose to nose with the younger warrior, his eyes like chips of ice. "One more word and you'll be searching the elders for ticks for the next moon. Understand?"

and Min-mew, this is my back-up entry for your contest if the other isn't acceptable.