Comments: 9
msinglynx [2004-10-05 21:47:58 +0000 UTC]
ah...yes that might help, other than that it is quite good..
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msinglynx [2004-10-05 21:27:44 +0000 UTC]
the shading is excellent but the face seems odd somehow, and the shoulders. I guess if it is a self portrait, I dont want to offend you, but, the face seems too thin, or as if it should be at least an inch wider and the forehead is very high, the head itself seems to large and too long for the body, especially with the tiny, sloping shoulders, which seem slightly deformed.
The neck is very sexy
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Cinemabun In reply to msinglynx [2004-10-05 21:39:29 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you. I like my neck too.
On the stretched quality of the face, I agree with you. It's a problem I've been combating for a while... what happens is, I draw sitting down, on a level table, so what I'm drawing is actually at a slant to my eye-level while I'm working on it, unless I lean over it. This means that although it looks in proportion to me while I am working, once I stand it up and step back, it turns out that the whole thing was actually drawn so that it looks stretched, vertically. I've started adding a little tilt to my art table, to help fight this in the future.
Thanks for noticing, though!
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kleinmeli [2004-10-01 12:05:29 +0000 UTC]
This one is really good!
I love the light/shadow in this drawing, perfectly done! Its not flatering..I mean it, I know how hard it is to do a self portrait.
Good work!
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betseyforgetsey [2004-10-01 04:01:10 +0000 UTC]
no, it's really good!!
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Cinemabun In reply to betseyforgetsey [2004-10-01 04:04:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Really, you flatter me. I guess the subject matter didn't hurt, either. What a dashing fellow he is!
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