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Laughing-Phoenix [2009-10-17 22:11:55 +0000 UTC]

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I think you did a pretty good job with creating depth in this painting. The only thing is that you could have pushed some of the darks on the figure darker to give the body parts on the figure more depth. It seems as though most of your focus was on the space itself as a whole, which I think you did a good job doing. But on the figure itself you could have been more specific. For instance, on her leg especially, you could have pushed the value to show that her left leg isalin front more. But all in all, good painting.

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