Comments: 20
XxAirtvxX [2011-03-05 05:00:20 +0000 UTC]
I love it so much
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darkroseprincess [2010-07-18 19:34:16 +0000 UTC]
a taste of steel, a taste of blood - that is what love is.
so true...
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bakaikarus [2010-02-21 17:06:02 +0000 UTC]
i actually really really like this. so intense. so true.
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RikkiluvsGaara1 [2010-01-13 06:03:10 +0000 UTC]
This piece is the best piece of work i have read in a loong time!I just...i love the words you used to explain such feelings of affection and pain. This is...its simply amazing. May i use this as part of my ID on here if i credit you?I would loovee that so much(:
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Evilangel642 [2009-11-21 05:04:06 +0000 UTC]
Amazing! So well written!
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Miz-Undastod [2009-05-13 18:10:10 +0000 UTC]
tbh i wuld saii it taste more like a burning flame Lolz
but still great poem !!
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ADPx1993 [2009-02-09 23:51:22 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing
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Tsukamei [2008-07-09 04:29:44 +0000 UTC]
beautiful . . .
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latenightphotosxx [2007-12-15 20:48:37 +0000 UTC]
It really does taste like steel.
you are completely right.
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BombaysChylde [2007-05-24 23:25:49 +0000 UTC]
Awesome piece.
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zahd [2007-02-18 06:35:31 +0000 UTC]
this is an awesome piece.
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twistedblueyes [2006-04-17 13:23:21 +0000 UTC]
great i love the line " I think you’re beautiful even though you don’t need me, even though you don’t need me at all, even though you don’t, even though you don’t need me at all."
coz i can just hear it in my head
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b-e-c-k-y [2006-03-30 16:29:26 +0000 UTC]
powerful. wow i miss reading well planned out words. very poetic and so true in almost anyone that has gone through deep love that is so strong, it's painful. i love your words and congrats on having a band sing it. you're very talented, keep it up
becky
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Elif-Swuad [2006-03-30 10:53:03 +0000 UTC]
Hearbreak tastes just like steel, I know just how it can feel. I would have broken another bottle to see Starlight sing its song, but not now I quit carving verses on my arm. I happened to put up something small, finally, as I happened to come up on this call. I know its spinining somewhere still though I've almost succeeded in keeping still, please look into my deviation and tell me what you thought.
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phoenixmemory [2006-03-30 08:13:32 +0000 UTC]
great use of repetition. perfect for a song
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