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Annaphotix [2010-05-04 20:07:00 +0000 UTC]
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This is most certainly a dramatic moment captured just as the train came round the bend into sight, with full plume of steam, and the ability to clearly see its identity on the front. The composition is good and I can imagine standing above it in anticipation of the smell of sulphur just about to envelop me - and the hope that there wouldn't be a notice anywhere near saying "Whistle" just as this was about to happen!
I like the composition and the content very much. However, the fact that as you say, you were shooting into the sun, together with the presence of the steam, unfortunately didn't do any favours for the shot, as it looks as though there was glare coming back onto the lens causing a kind of glaze all over the picture which has slightly obscured the vivid colours there would have been, and also caused the appearance of slightly inferior quality, particularly when looking at the tracks and ground in the foreground of the larger view of the image. This in turn has also caused the whiteness of the steam to be over-emphasized giving the appearance of it looking blown out.
I can see that this would have been quite a dilemma in the timing of things, and considering the circumstances, and that it is a telephoto shot too, you have produced a good result, which if taken with the sun in a different position or even with very diffuse sunlight, may well have turned out to be excellent.
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Annaphotix In reply to CJSutcliffe [2010-05-07 09:04:36 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to see it! Can you let me know when it's there as I'm away from home at the moment and have everyone I watch switched off except for my groups?
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zaco21 [2016-09-20 11:00:14 +0000 UTC]
That's smokey!
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Hermit60 [2010-12-08 09:17:53 +0000 UTC]
Nice shot
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OkamiTakahashi [2010-07-29 04:04:12 +0000 UTC]
Woo, lookit her go it! Beautiful engine!
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Brassed-Off [2010-01-09 00:24:57 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful Shot!
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DavidPenney [2010-01-06 19:46:08 +0000 UTC]
Can imagine this in b&w and it would be like stepping back in time, super image and lovely composition. Well captured, I really like this a lot.
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matt-durkan-railways [2010-01-06 19:39:04 +0000 UTC]
A particularly good effort when as you say, you were shooting into the sun.
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