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undertalefan24 [2016-09-24 01:35:11 +0000 UTC]
when i first got onto this page before i read this story i just thought "ok jack has his will back, BUT WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?"
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ivanganev1992 [2015-03-03 17:22:59 +0000 UTC]
that should be mister Black Foury Vamp and the crazed evil fanatic dragon Slayer . Foury Vamp is a real treat and potential monster not them .
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AK24cz [2014-06-06 04:00:36 +0000 UTC]
THIS NEEDS TO BE A BOOK!!!
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Jordan-2332 [2014-02-25 08:09:38 +0000 UTC]
When I think about the complex where this is set, I picture Black Mesa fom Half-Life. Of course, with some major differences such as it is on an island, has much more biology reseach, and lacks aliens teleporting every where. Oh, and has no HECU and Black Ops killing all but them selfs. Wait, is that even happening somewhere else around here, but unkown to the protagonists?
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derpety9000 [2013-08-24 02:35:45 +0000 UTC]
i have a friend named jack who also has black hair like the character in the story... should i be worried? 0-0
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clashmecha In reply to derpety9000 [2013-09-29 22:25:58 +0000 UTC]
Does he talk a lot or is he quiet like Jack from the story?
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blendercraft1 [2013-08-21 12:38:24 +0000 UTC]
Gaahhhh I want to read the next part!! When are you going to upload it?
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Matthew-Travelmaster [2013-03-16 02:41:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh, it just keeps getting better and better. ^^
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ghost0f0nyx [2013-03-15 22:55:51 +0000 UTC]
its been two years when is the next one going to be uploaded?
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thowra33 [2013-01-09 16:55:46 +0000 UTC]
sweet as hell
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xspyrox14 [2013-01-05 02:32:29 +0000 UTC]
dead man walking
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smi018 [2012-12-10 09:54:21 +0000 UTC]
By the way, what did the dragons ever do to cause humans to found the slayers? its really sad, the thought of such an amazing creature, killed just for its blood. );
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AmeKtheDragon In reply to smi018 [2016-04-16 14:30:53 +0000 UTC]
There was one dragon long ago that would terrorize humans that came along his path and killed thousands of humans too. Ever since then the humans have revolted against dragons everywhere... Over one hundred dragons and three hundred thousand humans died, it was called the "Dance of the Dragons". After that the rest of the dragons hid in caves, underwater, and even took on the form of a human. Yet very few of us show ourselves to a human hoping that dragons and humans could live in peace again, but I and a few other dragons try to keep the peace by battling the ones that step out of line. But we still fear that they will still try and kill us. But we do closely observe them to see if and when the one day will come where the dragons can finally live in our true forms.
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smi018 [2012-12-07 18:47:11 +0000 UTC]
Impressive storyline! I'd like to see more!
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TheDragonsCurse [2012-11-20 22:00:22 +0000 UTC]
Dragons. 'nuff said...
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maxbear12345 [2012-09-13 01:16:17 +0000 UTC]
When will it be up!!!
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maxbear12345 [2012-09-13 01:15:12 +0000 UTC]
When will it be up!!!
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Chibi-Fisch [2012-09-04 18:02:08 +0000 UTC]
Why do I have a feeling the black blob dragony-thing is made of orphan children?
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smi018 In reply to clashmecha [2012-12-10 09:34:49 +0000 UTC]
not going to share any spoilers eh? lol
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lp573 [2012-09-02 14:22:00 +0000 UTC]
It's so great.
This is the third time i read it and i never get bored.
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icedragonsoul [2012-09-01 14:14:46 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait!!! So much suspense ^.=.^
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asifilich [2012-08-27 10:02:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh Tavorth, y u so crazee?
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clashmecha In reply to asifilich [2012-08-31 07:55:58 +0000 UTC]
That'll be explained soon enough ^_^
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extremespeeds [2012-08-22 09:32:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad Jack is back on the game! But i wonder, how is the villain'other self like?
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Gadrac [2012-06-18 11:06:22 +0000 UTC]
Double comment, but I don't care!
When is the next part coming along?! Want to read more! It's just too great!
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Skulblakagarm [2012-05-31 02:54:15 +0000 UTC]
Finnaly found your site again after 1 year. You do good work.
I commend that but I am going to repeat what appers to be the question of the story. WHEN IS THE NEXT PART GOING UP?!?!
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whaterbeep [2012-04-25 00:32:03 +0000 UTC]
hey if the guy wants to stop the experiments gone wrongs then why not get a bmf15 and shoot them? u jelly?
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RileaRymber [2012-03-29 21:46:29 +0000 UTC]
Yay. Glad to here p. 15 coming soon. Again, I love your story.
... It motivated me to start writing again.
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RockinRadio [2012-03-22 16:19:29 +0000 UTC]
you should do one at trasks point of view. that would be fun!
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clashmecha In reply to RockinRadio [2012-03-26 11:59:42 +0000 UTC]
Hmm I'll think about that one.
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RockinRadio [2012-03-16 14:59:19 +0000 UTC]
in a sense jack isnt a dragon he just is forced to take the form of one.
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clashmecha In reply to RockinRadio [2012-03-22 12:48:37 +0000 UTC]
You are correct in that assessment ^_^
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