Comments: 28
dannysuling [2014-10-02 16:53:14 +0000 UTC]
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This is a really intense image. it has a lot going for it, including pose, expression, shading and shadow, lighting choices, and overall concept. Much to like and appreciate.
Special likes: the welts, the clamped nipples, the clipped labia.
A couple of concerns:
1. It's not immediately obvious how her wrists are attached to the lower bar, nor why she should be making fists (except for dealing with overall pain).
2. If she's been there that long, her face ought to be more "drawn" – that is, showing signs of exhaustion, especially with her tongue pierced and weighted. Needs tears, and/or drool, and/or forehead creases, and/or eyebrow curves, and/or more pronounced bags under her eyes, etc.
3. Her thighs don't seem to be long enough, even given the perspective and POV you've chosen. If we're supposed to assume that most of her legs are pulled behind her, then we should be seeing the soles of her feet somewhere, and her torso ought to be canted a bit forward. But if she's supposed to be kneeling on that bottom bar, then she needs more length in her thighs.
This could be a very high potential image; I'm hoping these suggestions are amenable to you.
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kinkygeye [2020-01-12 19:07:20 +0000 UTC]
Ouch, this looks soooo painful
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clay3570 In reply to kinkygeye [2020-01-12 23:29:51 +0000 UTC]
yes, yes it is, happy you like
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paingirrrl [2016-01-26 15:58:06 +0000 UTC]
nice device.... would like to check it out... you make me soooo hot -
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LivingIsTheDream [2015-04-07 00:13:39 +0000 UTC]
Another fine pic, thanks for posting.
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clay3570 In reply to Scarlet-Mirage [2014-10-21 14:32:22 +0000 UTC]
well its in a sauna, so its going to get hot!
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mrhungry56 [2014-10-08 05:33:43 +0000 UTC]
Well here's a woman in a lot of pain. And now she's gonna sweat even more. Pretty cruel, as others have said, but a good picture too.
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clay3570 In reply to mrhungry56 [2014-10-08 16:06:29 +0000 UTC]
thank you I do seem to be in a cruel mood these day?
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clay3570 In reply to NEINNEINNEIN [2014-10-02 12:13:27 +0000 UTC]
yes, yes it is! I wonder if she did something wrong, or if shes just a victim?
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clay3570 In reply to OakEgg [2014-10-02 05:01:08 +0000 UTC]
gotta do the cruel, that almost rhymes. lol!
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