avpmgirl [2011-05-08 21:18:57 +0000 UTC]
You're very pretty. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, doll . On to the critique haha. I like how all the focus is on your eye and the FAME. Maybe make the word a little darker, like with some gel eyeliner and a thin brush. Mind you, I'm no proffesional haha. I didn't notice the quote until I read the discription and I can't really read it now. I think if you wanted it to be notice, choose a different font and color. This is really pretty and insightful. I LOVE it!
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Clergna In reply to avpmgirl [2011-05-09 12:49:26 +0000 UTC]
thank you Thanks for the critique! About "FAME" I draw it on my face and it was really dark black , it's in the light (: I'll try to don't do the same mistake next time. About the quotation, I read it without problems, but I'll dim it (: Different computers, different bright, contrast and colours...
avpmgirl In reply to Clergna [2011-05-10 01:51:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, it was just the brightness of my computer. I like the quote there now haha
Clergna In reply to avpmgirl [2011-05-10 06:01:05 +0000 UTC]
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JulaBean [2011-05-08 20:09:46 +0000 UTC]
I love it and u r pretty. I cannot read it though... what does it say?
Clergna In reply to JulaBean [2011-05-08 20:12:18 +0000 UTC]
thank you "Fame is the thirst of youth." Lord Byron
ponyfan101 [2011-05-08 18:45:55 +0000 UTC]
you're pretty
Clergna In reply to ponyfan101 [2011-05-08 19:11:51 +0000 UTC]
haha D good joke thank you anyway (:
ponyfan101 In reply to Clergna [2011-05-08 21:29:43 +0000 UTC]
not a joke!
Clergna In reply to ponyfan101 [2011-05-09 13:18:04 +0000 UTC]