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Published: 2005-12-05 03:15:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1010; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 207
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This is very expressive, I quite like it. I'm sure just about everyone can relate to this piece, and you've taken simple text and phrases and put them together in a powerful way. Great job. I especially like the jumbled 'life' part... can be taken so many ways.
JOD
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This seems to embody confusion... it looks very simple but there is so much to it...
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Jumble the words up a bit more, Life is so much more interesting to look at than the other phrases in my opinion. I really like how the image is orchestrated thought. Good job.
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I like this a lot... it's very simple but very expressive all the same. I'd love to see more of what you did with "life" in the other statements... so they're more like fragments of thoughts rather than a complete thought... ^^
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i like how the 'lfei' are all just messed up, i really like that
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i like the way you've limited the palette to just blue and blakc and white. nice composition. well done.
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i like the way you've limited the palette to just blue and blakc and white. nice composition. well done.
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A beautiful expression of Futurism... I myself have been studying Russian Constructivism lately.
I especially like the arrangement of the word "Life" in the lower left. You may be able to do a bit more with "and as I do this, I think of you" in the upper left and "be strong" in mid-left, perhaps by increasing the point size and rotating a bit. The two rows of linear white-space created by those elements detract a bit from the anarchic, free-form feel generated by this piece, but all and all it is very well executed.
Its great to find another deviant who realizes that design can be art, too.
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thanks so much! for the fave and for one of the best comments I've gotten so far
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Its the least I could do; I know that I'd want the same thing, after all. I've almost given up looking for anyone else who took an interest in design, let alone with the ability to turn thought into form so beautifully. 
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no... i'm just another student with a computer to play with
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It would seem that we have a bit in common, then.
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i love the variations in the text. looks cool. but it is pretty dang random.
I suggest putting the poem in the description so that people can be sure to get the peom in the right order. I for one have no idea what eighty-two has to do with anyhting.
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thanks
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hehe, just noticed ur signature... my heritage is mostly czech. Oh ya. Damn proud of it too. lol. Mainly cuz of the 'Z' in it, but still, lol.
I just dont get the state of confusion from this... my first reaction was that u were breakin up with somebody....
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I just love the confusion in this wallpaper. Nice choice of text!
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Pretty cool, would be nice to see some more imaginative fonts in there.
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thanks! I'm working on the font thing for my next ones
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there are some crazy ones on here you can d/l for free so try em all!
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This is better. Especially like the jumbled letters on the bottom left. It's those blue shapes, they add an extra element and give my eye a direction to follow. With the blue shapes pointing down and across, and that exclamation point pointing down to the left and that jumble of letters adding weight and interest exactly where the others are pointing... it adds up to a pretty nice composition. but the text still lacks...something. i guess, if i were you, i'd not keep the words on straight lines. it just looks odd seeing little groupings of lines. they need more unity and a flow, cuz it's still really hard to read. but yeah, good job on the composition.
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thanks!
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I think this is my favourite of your works, it really has that moody powerful sense about it.
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