moviegeek1097 [2017-04-15 17:48:43 +0000 UTC]
you should use thinner outlines, also i feel the bio and powers section is a little bloated. also using a human reference to make your character look more anatomically correct is recommended, unless you're going for a more cartoony style. If so, you should give your character a more expressive, less-stiff pose. But besides that, this is pretty good design. PS I like the stingy dance at the bottom X3
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Clockverk1921 In reply to moviegeek1097 [2017-04-15 17:54:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm more of a story teller than an artist, So sorry if the bio is a bit much XD I don't really care either way, But I appreciate the interests. When it comes to outlines, The thicker outlines are for a reason, I prefer them. And I AM going for a more cartoony art-style as of recently. I see what you mean with the poses, I did want to get more dynamic with the poses for my characters... I'm just not a good enough artist to do that easily, Or well for that matter. So thanks for the interest and the great comment!
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